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Kyle aka Huck
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since 2000-07-16
Posts 63
Linn, MO USA

0 posted 2000-07-17 04:43 AM


When I'm lost,
You're always there.
When I'm blue,
You're always there.
When I'm happy,
You're always there.
When I'm an idiot,
You're still always there.
And when I don't know what to say and am afraid,
You're always there.

Candle In The Window....

© Copyright 2000 Kyle Finn - All Rights Reserved
Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2000-07-17 07:05 AM


Kyle~
Welcome to Passion's.
I've seen a LOT of your poetry since yesterday.

I would encourage you to read the forum guidelines
and SLOW DOWN !  
We're not going anywhere !

Kyle, take the time to read and respond
to the poetry of others, post no more than
four poems per 24 hour time period in
any one forum.

Twenty three poems throughout the forums
in one day is way over the limit for any
of us.  

You will find that if you continue to
flood us with your poetry that your work will be ignored -
not that you don't have some decent thoughts in your work,
but because this isn't the Kyle/Huck show !  

I hope you will continue to write and share
a few poems a day with us.
By observing the courtesy guidelines of the
forums, you will see the response to your
poetry grow ... s  l  o  w  l  y  !

Thanks for sharing this one ...
I like the idea of a 'Candle In The Window'
as a testament of one who is always there.

Good luck, Kyle.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Kyle aka Huck
Member
since 2000-07-16
Posts 63
Linn, MO USA
2 posted 2000-07-17 11:17 AM


sorry, i wasnt in the best of moods and didnt have any paper to write on
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