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browneyes reflecting. . . --Challenge #6
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browneyes reflecting. . . --Challenge #6 |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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from behind the fan she reveals only a hint of who she is is she a mystery? an enigma wrapped in a question? no, she is there. . . you only have to look she inspires, she teaches opening her heart to those who are without love they give to her she gives to them browneyes reflecting hate into love browneyes reflecting they peer into the heart they see more of you than you wish to reveal but they hide more from you than you'll ever begin to see ---------------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
sven....I love a mystery, and this is a great one...but then, I've never seen a work by you that isn't!!!! Love received is equal to love given! |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
ah, this is great.....mystery is enchanting. always...a great read! |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
I think this might be true for so many people Sven. Very nicely written. Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
How wonderful to be a friend to those brown eyes! I love it! Sunny ~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow. Helen Keller ~~~ When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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Gossamerwings Member
since 2000-07-18
Posts 207 |
A twist here. Very nice, Sven!  Gossamerwings ;) |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Very intriguing Sven. Loved it....Juls |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
WOW Sven you have said alot here...very well done friend  Love Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Are we going back a few decades Sven? When it was quite fashionable for the ladies to carry a fan. Whatever the case it sounds like we have a very intelligent and mysterious lady here. Very good writing I like that mysterious angle and how she is going to look right into the soul of others without revealing herself entirely...Good, good good great! |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Thank you all. . . Sunny1, thank you. . . are you saying that all of my work is mysterious?? poutprincess, glad that you enjoyed. . . Marina, I think that it is true for more people than we know. . . thank you. . . Sunshine, thank you. . . Gossamer, a twist eh?? Thank you my friend. . . Juls, thank you very much. . . tracie, many thanks to you my friend ethome, yes. . . I remember those fans. . . quite wonderful. . . thank you. . . ----------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Tara Simms Senior Member
since 1999-08-12
Posts 1244Honea Path, SC USA |
Wow! Sven, I am so touched, I think I'm speechless! You did an EXCELLENT job on this challenge (writing a poem about me). This one really knocked my socks off. I am honored to be seen by you in this way. I only pray that others see me in this light as well. The line "reflecting hate into love" is SUPERB! It matters not how strait the gate; How charged with punishments the scroll; I am the master of my fate: I am the captain of my soul. --W.E. Henley |
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