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First Night With You
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First Night With You |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now 
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"FIRST NIGHT WITH YOU" A moonbeam shone down out of the night, I could see it caress your face. Your deep eyes sparkled like diamonds, Soft like my heart, as it beat a faster pace. This moonbeam bathed you with its brilliance, Your body shining in the night. I can now see your inner beauty, A heavenly and so breathtaking a sight. I stared and gazed upon you, In wonderment I felt from within. The passions that I had only for you, Anyone else would think it a sin. The light upon you never dimmed, As I watched you standing there. The radiance of you started an aurora, And it came through your beauty, as it dared. My heart swelled within me, As this was a most beautiful sight. My angel I know has touched you, While you stood there in the light. I ached and wanted to embrace, Nervous was I, as I asked if I might Then slowly was I touched by your moonbeam, As it shown through in the middle of this night. Tenderly our fingers touched, Melting together as they would do. Becoming one together in that moonbeam, Tenderly, as this was my first night with you. Bill Charles |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Bill...... I hope I'm the first to tell you that this is a very, very beautiful poem.......no, it's more than that.. it's like a glowing painting........ maybe painted with moonbeams! I do so love this one!< !signature--> ~~~~~Live for Today~~~~~ taste every single moment [This message has been edited by Sunny1 (edited 07-19-2000).] |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Sunny1, Yes, you were the first to say the words as only you can say them about this poem. Thank you, as I always look forward to your comments. |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Such tenderness lies in your words. This is lovely. Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Meadowmuse, Again, thank you for your kind words. |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
writen with such sencerity and adoration..she is very lucky to have someone like you who can expressive themselves in such a romantic and charming way! loved it! |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Poutprincess, You are very gracious with your reply. Thank you ever so much. |
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ddgoose Member
since 2000-07-25
Posts 250Baltimore, MD, USA |
Bill You write with such passion and emotion. I enjoyed reading this. Write more! |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
ddgoose, Thanks for the gracious reply. I pray that I can continue writing right up until they close that lid. On second thought, maybe even after the lid is closed for good. Thanks for stopping by. |
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MagnoliaBlue Member
since 2000-05-12
Posts 367 |
Nothing like a moonlit evening, and you describe it so romantically!  ~My Skipper Jim I love you! Your Lady June~ |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
This is the first night??? Wow...  Great work Bill, your imagery was beautiful~ |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Bill this is really beautiful. Always a pleasure to see a man with such a romantic heart. Take care, Juls |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Bill, This poem is so tender and beautiful. Your poems are filled with romance. I love reading your writings. rosepetals25 |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
MagnoliaBlue, Thanks for coming by once again to visit one of my poems. A moonlit night, a romantic evening, Ahhhhhhh. Butterflies_dont_cry, It's always nice to see you. Thank you for your kind comments juliet_2u, Your gracious comments are very appreciated. A romantic heart I have, and to share it in my writings is something I care very much about. Hi rosepetals25, So nice to see you again. Thank you so much for your kind reply. Please do come back. |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
A moonbeam shone down out of the night, I could see it caress your face. Your deep eyes sparkled like diamonds, Soft like my heart, as it beat a faster pace. very beautiful... Bill..as all things "moonlike" capture my attention MM |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Hi MMoonchild, Thank you for your comments. I love the night, especially the moonlight peaking through the clouds, during a romantic night for two. |
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Trew Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 365Ottawa, Canada |
Bill! Whew! I thought I was the only guy who got so nervous during that first encounter. Then the magic of the first touch... Magical! Not unlike her moonbeams. I enjoyed this one a lot! |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Thanks Trew, Your comments are very appreciated. Nope, you're not the only one, me too as a matter of fact. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Bill, This was surely written by a man in love. It is so warm and gently laid upon the page. A very special love poem for a very special lady. Liz |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Elizabeth, Thank you for your special reply. All I can answer to your comment is maybe, but perhaps written for a very special lady. Thanks again for taking the time to stop by. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Bill--beautiful, romantic, sensual and tender...loved it! |
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Tennessee Angel Senior Member
since 2000-06-03
Posts 661Tennessee |
Ah, another beautiful piece, Bill! Your words melt the heart of this angel. --You can either take me as I am...or you can watch me as I go.-- |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Hello Martie, Glad that you stopped by and liked this little one that I have done. It's wonderful to read words such as yours, that you have written for comments. Hi Tennessee Angel Thanks Angel for your gracious comments about my humble writing. It's a nice feeling to be able to touch just someone with my words. Thanks again, and come on back. |
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