Open Poetry #8 |
In the Light of Love Above..............revised |
Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
In the Light of Love Above Flowers forever-fragrant bloom When Heaven’s high gates open Birds in harmony, whistle their tune In the light of love above Hourglass of sand, we need not know In picturesque soft meadows of green In crystal waters, an angel’s glow In the light of love above Souls of destiny in soft sunset blush Hearts awaiting wakening Beat for eternity in a humble hush In the light of love above It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
This is remarkably beautiful, Marina. I applaud you. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
oh man this is gorgeous. you have done well today my poetic friend. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
CLAP CLAP CLAP And it is time for some ovation... Marina, this is very beautifully written... regards, sudhir |
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TerryW Senior Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 779Louisville, Mississippi, USA |
Marina~ Oh, my dear, this is absolutely lovely! You always paint such beatuiful scenes in my mind that you take my breath away. And you can make even the sunniest day seem so much brighter! Love Ya~ ~you reached inside, you touched my heart, and I am all the better for it~ Terry A. Woodson, Jr. |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
serenity, thank you. I am glad you enjoyed it. Mark, coming from you that means a great deal....thank you Sudhir, thank my friend....thank you Terry, you are a sweetheart!!!!! Thank you It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Excellent my friend. . . You have grown much in your short time here. . . this is proof. . . Wonderful. . . ------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
"Beat for eternity in a humble hush." This is really beautiful Marina... you make heaven seems very desirable...James |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Sven, thank you my friend. I hope my muse will return soon. James, thank you. I hope it is all of what I wrote although......I'm quite ready to find out!! Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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