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Forever My Love |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart 
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~Forever My Love~ As I write my love, Thy heart is filled with saddnes and pain, Tears with prism rainbows dropping like the rain, With each tear thy heart beats a little slower, Knowing our souls, our hearts, have touched forever my love, It is the death of my heart, my very existance, Though there be miles between us through lifes' distance, Our hearts will never feel that distance,that division, for we have loved without one touch, one kiss,Our words, our souls collided into the realm of loves' eternal bliss, merged forever, my love, There were days my love, that I felt you so close, yet you were so far, I longed to come to you where you are, There were times I needed you intensely,I could feel my heart bleeding for you, Write words or hear Thy voice was all I could do, It is torture, a paradox, how you love someone, so deeply, but yet you cannot touch, cannot feel them completely, My heart has changed, you have changed it, you gave me wings to fly, helped me to laugh instead of cry, You gave me hope when all hope was gone, when I felt sad and all alone, you reached out and brought out the best in me, You made me see the true me, you made me feel special,like I was the center of your universe, I knew you were my soulmate, the moment we conversed, You have changed my life, lifted me out of darkness and despair, I felt the many ways you cared, If I die today, tomorrow, My heart had to speak to your heart, I had to tell you, I had to give you a part of me, To let you see, You will always be My forever Love... ~(Written For Someone Who will always be special to me, no matter where they are, where they go, who they are with in this lifetime. You Know who you are)~ [This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (edited 07-22-2000).] |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Hi A Romantic Heart this is a beautiful ballad of love and sadness. I don't know who the guy is but I'm sure he's missing something good. Excellent expression of emotions..good writing! take care..........ethome |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Thank you ethome, for the sweet words from your heart...  |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
This poem is so softly romantic... "helped me to laugh instead of cry" "I felt the many ways you cared" It is a torture, a paradox, how you love someone so deeply, but yet you cannot touch them, cannot feel them completely." (WOW) You have written a special poem Romantic...full of love and wanting. I hope for the best for you and your tender romantic heart...James |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Thank you James, you always know how to make me feel better! Thanks for your careing words! |
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Kathryn Miller New Member
since 2000-07-22
Posts 6 |
You can tell this is written from the heart. I can emphathise with the feelings expressed by your words. I too write from my heart & soul. Thank for sharing your feelings with us. I will be posting a poem out here too. I am new at this and I need to share also. What better way to express ourselves. Please keep sharing. Kathryn Miller |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Welcome Katheryn, I will be looking forward to reading yours!!!Thanks! |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
What a tenderness and honesty you share. I am sure that whoever the lucky guy is, he is forever changed because of you. Great write. |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Excellent..loving some from afar is very hard...  |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Mark you always reply to my poetry..I appreciate you!!! This muse has other committments without me...but I am thankful for the time spent..for that short time chaged me, my life forever! Miss devine yes it is very hard, hardest thing I have had to do...Thank you, I poured my heart out on this one! |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
RH, This was wonderful and emotional writing my friend. Though far, they are always close in heart. So well said. I hope it all works out for you. LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Michael Auguste Junior Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 12USA |
I enjoyed this so very much. Such tenderness. Really very nice. Michael Auguste |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
This was more than romantic This is pure passion, though tenderly spoken I hope the right person reads it Great read Liz |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Yes, this is pure passion! Very beautifully done, too! Denise |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Thanks Lone Wolf, Michael, Elizabeth and Denise I am just letting all of me..true me flow out..to the sea...likemessage in a bottle, but message in passions! Get it! |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
ARH, this is a deep heart felt tribute, to someone special. I know how just hearing someone's voice can deeply touch you. I heard a voice from heaven and she was just so sweet. They touch a part of your heart, even knowing that you may never ever meet. So here's to sweet voices and distant loveing friends. Parker [This message has been edited by Haleyja (edited 07-25-2000).] |
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