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Dear Husband Mine
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Dear Husband Mine |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada 
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Dear Husband Mine Dear husband mine, how can I show, My love for you, I've come to know? Your warm and tender, loving touch, Still lingers after fingers brush; As in the days of long ago, Still sparks ignite my passions so. Your laugh ... sweet music to my ears, Can always ease my tender tears; A voice that echoes through my heart, Records the love that n'er shall part. Your gentle eyes that sparkle so, Light up my sight in after-glow; One furtive glance across the room, Can make this heart still sigh and swoon. Your smile and silent, knowing glance, Devour me, with sweet romance; A love that lets my spirit soar, Beyond the skies for evermore. Though grains of sand may trickle time, Our love is endless ... husband mine. /Kit McCallum |
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Fred Hobbs Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 329Tallahassee, Florida, US |
Kit, This is a fine offering and a wonderful tribute. Why isn't this a book submission? fh |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
What a lucky man he is...and how wonderful you still feel this way. never say never |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Kit* What a beautiful tribute to your husband, you are both so blessed to live in the love that brought you together~ |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Your warm and tender, loving touch, Still lingers after fingers brush; This is such a beautiful passage, The whole poem is exquisite Liz |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ah, did he look at you, speechless? Sunny ~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow. Helen Keller ~~~ When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Kit, Geez, if you only were to give lessons on how to show feelings like you do towards someone you care for. Lucky guy! |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Ah so tender, and utterly romantic... Kit, I am sure that you have a happy married life and I wish that it remains that way forever... regards, sudhir |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Kit--What a beautiful, loving look at the sweetness of this relationship...Wonderful poetry! |
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Jacman Member
since 2000-06-27
Posts 291Dwight Il, US |
Absolutely beautiful Kit. I hope that in my future, I will have a wife as tender and compassionate as you seem to be. You are an excellent writer and not a bad Moderator. Keep it up. Jason  Just as soon as I belong, then it's time I disapear... -Metallica- |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Sweet music to my and his ears I'm sure...nice to be appreciated..James |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Fred: Thank you Fred! (I've already posted a few for the book, and thought I'd stop there) Paula: Thanks Paula! I am the lucky one though ... Butterflies: Thank you so much Butterflies ... I count my blessings daily ... Elizabeth: Your kind words are so appreciated Liz ... thank you ... Sunshine: I read it to him last night Sunshine, and low and behold ... he blushed! Now that's a great reaction! Thanks Sunshine! Bill: Thank you Bill! It took 20 years to learn, and we've both learned together ... Sudhir: My wishes as well Sudhir ... and thank you for such lovely thoughts! Martie: Thank you so much Martie ... we are fortunate indeed ... Jason: Thank you Jason! If your sweet poetry is any indication, you will surely find a woman to treasure your heart (and I loved the comment about moderator ... good eh?  )James: Thank you so much James ... your comment is music to this poets ears! Much appreciation to all, /Kit |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Kit...what a wonderful tribute and so beautifully done. I agree why no book submission? Take care.....ethome.. |
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Elizabeth
Moderator
Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
How beautiful this poem, and wonderful that you still feel this way about each other. Elizabeth Why ME??? |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
Kit, this is absolutely beautiful. Lucky guy, lucky you!  |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Beautiful Kit! Such a wonderful love you share. God grant me the serenity to accept the people I cannot change, the courage to change the one I can, and the wisdom to know it's me. ~Unknown |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Jeez, Kit, people like you and Martie are gonna give marriage a good name! (as it should be )It's a wonderful poem, Kit and I'm very happy for you both.... |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
~Ethome: Reached my limit for book submissions ... but thanks Ethome! ~Elizabeth: Till the final breath Elizabeth ... thank you! ~Eloise: Very lucky indeed ... thanks Eloise! ~EagleOne: Thank you EagleOne, I'm glad it comes through in this verse! ~Balladeer: We try Michael ... we try! Gentle reminders that not all are unhappy, thank goodness! Best wishes, /Kit |
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