»
Archives
»
Open Poetry #8
»
Letter From the Heart
| Open Poetry #8 |
|
Letter From the Heart |
|
|
Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song 
|
Try as I might I cannot not get this to post properly. I ask you to look to the words instead of the failed attempt at the format. Thank you. Letter From The Heart Dear love I miss you so in every way From the heavens so far up above to where wind blown saplings begin to sway Across many miles and many clouds our love is sent As our hearts are torn between the life we have chosen And the one with each other that would be so better spent Why do we choose the one that has left our hearts so frozen Give me the chance to take you and caress the pain all away To love you freely as we walked through life hand in hand Allow me to kiss your heart and teach it again how to play As we walk along the beach building castles in the sand Come to me through the stars dancing in the night sky Look up at the moon before you go to sleep tonight No longer will you suffer wishing for me as you cry For I see the same moon the one shining so bright Let the night fairies sprinkle you with their dust And float you to the ceiling of powdery clouds Walk along the pillows with all of your trust We begin our flight away from the crowd Please baby just give love one more chance Meet me in the corner of heaven's floor You heart in mine as we begin to dance Thru the reaches as we begin to soar This is my dream that I want to be Baby open your eyes take a look True love waits to set you free For me,caring is all it took Let love take it's flight Please hon let it be Use this night This I plea Love Me Mark Bohannan [This message has been edited by Mark Bohannan (edited 07-30-2000).] |
||
| © Copyright 2000 Mark Bohannan - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
OOHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH never say never |
||
|
Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
"Allow me to kiss your heart and teach it again how to play" Oh my, Mark! Simply exquisite! I loved your romantic thoughts in this, I could feel the longing. Beautiful flow ... stunning work ... enchanting presentation! Best wishes, /Kit LOL ... you were playing lost and found over on the other thread ... I saw this beautiful poem, read it, but by the time I'd finished responding to you, it had vanished into the great beyond! Glad to see you found it Mark! I copied my thoughts back over  |
||
|
JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
A beautiful and tender read Mark...I can make out the heart...I hope you can fix the editing because after a while they don't let you edit the poems any more...they have to do it...and good luck with that situation...James |
||
|
Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Paula-WOOOOOOOOOOOW. Thanks girl. nuff said.  Kit-Thank you so much and I am blushing at your kind words. You have made my day. Thank you for your patience also with the disappearing post.LOL James-Thank you much my friend and WE ARE working on it and it shall be done. |
||
|
Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
What a tender loving heart you have, dear Mark...this is lovely to read...and so full of heart's longing...it makes me wish for your wish. Hugs. |
||
|
Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Mark this is so tender and sweet.. a look into the longing and desires of your heart... so romantic and graceful who could resist such a sweet plea better be careful..your heart is showing someone may start to call you a poet. love it MC JM There are places inside our souls - that have never been touched. There are places inside our hearts - that need to be loved this much. ~jm~ |
||
|
Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Oh Mark.....this is wonderful!!!!!! I agree with Gemini....er....I mean....JM. Someone is going to call you a poet if you keep writing like this!!! Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
||
|
Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Mark... This poem is beautiful and touching, and anyone in their right mind would see that your heart is in the right place........... I hope that whomever this is for is worthy of you........ ~~ To Live is to Give ~~ |
||
|
Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Martie- with the both of us wishing for it maybe it will come to be. Thank you my friend for your gentle words. JM-so quit resisting will ya.LOL Thank you m'lady you are truely sweet. Marina-shhhh....they don't know I have met Gemini.LOL ( I met I liked . ) Thank you much.Sunny1-she is more than worthy and it is I who am trying to be the worthy one. I thank you for your tender reply. [This message has been edited by Mark Bohannan (edited 07-30-2000).] |
||
|
Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
I had to come back and read this pretty plea one more time. never say never |
||
|
MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Mark if you dont mind I will fix this heart for you if you like... I love to do that..mend hearts ~~softly Maureen the heart mender |
||
|
Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Mark* Your plea is heart felt and heart heard...to come across a love that fills every dream, every hope possible and then to overcome past, present and future to hold it tight...all are huge barriers...but true love scales those walls and remains through every storm...beautiful writing Mark...the view on this side of your heart is beautiful~ |
||
|
Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
resist????????? I wasnt resisting.. I was just playing hard to get LOL (or was that you) (hehe)   you know me...easy for poets ERRRRRR I mean POETRY!!!!!! OH MAN..what do they put in this raspberry tea thank you MC... JM |
||
|
Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Very beautiful words, Mark and,as far as the graphic goes....like most of us, your heart may not be perfect but it's in the right place |
||
|
Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Paula-thank you for the encouragement. Glad you liked it. Maureen-you may have the one posted and do as you will.lol I have tried everything. As for the other one it is already in surgery and awaiting the outcome.ROFL Thanks for taking the time and reading. Bdc-your words always make me smile and I do so appreciate the sincerity in them. I thank you for always taking the time to read when I post. Glad it looks good from there cause this side is real messed up baby. LOL JM-glad you decided not to resist...it would be futile at this point.ROFL I dont know what is in that tea but every since you gave me some I have been feeling really strange....you know sort of like the animals do in the spring. Thanks girllater-hard to get-gator. Balladeer-One can always count on you to make one feel better. Thank you so much kind sir. |
||
|
Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Ditto on Balladeer.... Mark, my friend... all your efforts for this just shows the deep emotions in your heart... ... keep them always with you, the lucky one will then enjoy her life too with your heart as the greatest gift she ever recieved... regards, sudhir P.S. I could help fix the graphic if necessary... but I don't think it is... for the message is clear... [This message has been edited by Sudhir Iyer (edited 07-31-2000).] |
||
|
JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Lovely words in this Letter from the Heart. I wanted to do a love poem with a heart but I couldn't figure out how...James |
||
|
Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Isn't it frustrating when a format doesn't work out like it should when we've struggled so long to make it "right"!? BUT, you see my dear friend Mark, what you SAID was more important than how it looked! Such is a book! Such is a person! You must dig deep inside to see what is truly there, and what is truly here in this very poem is what comes from inside you! You are so very right...you ARE only going to get better, and better, and my little Energizer bunny, better! Karilea When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
||
|
JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
I like it....just beautiful.....no surprises though they're all great!!! And I agree....your heart is beginning to show in more ways than one.....Don't worry too much you'll get it right eventually in more ways than one!! Julie :) |
||
|
cathybohannan Member
since 2000-07-31
Posts 140Paintsville,KY |
Mark, I loved your poem. It is very touching and I see what you mean about your format, it still comes out to be a heart on my monitor. Love your sister Cathy |
||
|
Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Sudhir-I thank you for being the gentleman that you are as well. No need for the fix, it has sort of grown on me but I do appreciate the offer kind sir.  James-thank you and a little note...in word pad it is actually easy....the problem did not start until I posted....I think I may have needed it to be smaller.LOL (big heart)ROFL. try it and good luck. Karilea-Thank you much and I will keep trying and trying and trying and.... Julie-ahhh girl you make me blush. Cathy-welcome to Passions girl. I am so glad you decided to join us. Wanna change monitors...LOL Thank you sis and I will be looking for you.....don't go awry.. |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
