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Alwye
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In the space between moments

0 posted 2000-07-24 01:12 AM


5-7-5
~*~
Falling through the night
Sorrow's droplets softly fly
O'er liquid starlight.
~*~
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*Krista Knutson*

"You never lose by loving. You always lose by holding back."
                         -Barbara DeAngelis


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1 posted 2000-07-24 01:18 AM


Perfection of imagery! Boy you've got these haikus down pat! Very nice job..    
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2 posted 2000-07-24 01:23 AM


Great job krista!  i like your haikus, though i imagine they're hard to write.  every word is obviously chosen carefully!  like it much!  

Erin

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3 posted 2000-07-24 07:24 AM


Krista~

Sorrow's tears cascade
Caught by the heart of a friend
Tissued with much love



*Lovely thoughts you pen, little poet.
~*Marge*~



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4 posted 2000-07-24 08:55 PM


Beautiful, Krista...

~ Claire

Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau


Alwye
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In the space between moments
5 posted 2000-07-24 10:03 PM


Thank you all so much.  

*Krista Knutson*

"You never lose by loving. You always lose by holding back."
-Barbara DeAngelis

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6 posted 2000-07-24 11:48 PM


Beautiful Haiku, dear, creating such a vivid image in a few short syllables is quite a feat! Enjoyed this much!


Abrahm Simons

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7 posted 2000-07-25 05:30 AM


Love your Haikus Krista, this is beautiful!  
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8 posted 2000-07-25 08:25 AM




Wow, Krista, this is amazing.  It really is quite the feat to write something as imaginative and beautiful as this in only a few syllables.  I have always respected your talent and stood in awe of your work. I look forward to more haikus or senryus by you  

Take care,
Melissa Honeybee


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