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We Hide Within Our Words |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Sometimes we hide within our words, a pain that screams for release. Hoping that someone will see and offer our soul surcease. Simply put, a rhyme or verse, can a complicated thought impart. Finding the key to the puzzle, can heal a wounded heart. Read well my poems, brother, but heed well my words, my friend. Do not trust the beginning, until you’ve read the end. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Indeed, Indeed..between the lines we must read. PERFECT Sharon...how'd ya get to be so wise  very cool poem PDV... and so nice to have a post from you... been too long later-divine-gator jm There are places inside our souls - that have never been touched. There are places inside our hearts - that need to be loved this much. ~jm~ |
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ma miller Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 806 |
extremely well said, Poet deVine ... ditto JM's comments ... (you really set us up for that ending though) |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
And when you get to the end you have to go back to the beginning in order to unravel the middle..  HUSG |
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Ardonida Member
since 2000-05-18
Posts 76 |
Hey there DVP, Hmmm I loved this one, very true words spoken(or should I say written?) by a very wise poet!! A. |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
WOW this is all too true tho sometimes I think the meanings of some of my poems are better left unearthed LOL ~H Great writing girl! |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
deep...and a great read as well... so- do the endings have to justify the means..........Very Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Sharon, this is Wonderful and so very true Do not trust the beginning, until you’ve read the end. ....... Indeed |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
PoetdeVine~ Well .... firstly~ Congratulations on your 8000 th post ! ! Secondly ~ A neat post ! Those of us who know you ... know we'll find a treasure in your words. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Poet deVine, Ow, la, la, very nicely written. A joy to read, so many meanings that I derived from your writing. I must read more of them. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Very well said, deVine one....and a hearty congrats on the eight grand!!!! |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
A very True write, enjoyed..and am amazed at the 8000 mark...wow ~~softly smiling Maureen |
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BSC
Moderator
Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Just incredible and so very true. WOW at the 8,000 mark.....Congratulations. Bonnie |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Amen, PDV! Corinne |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
~Sharon~ Very well said! You're a wise and talented poet indeed. I always look forward to all of your poems and ideas! Take care, Melissa Honeybee The beauty of poetry gives me wings to fly |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Congrats on our 8000th post to start with. The verse is wonderful...the words say so much and express what so many of us feel. Perfect way to enter the 8000th. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Poet deVine, So true are your words. The end is always the best part anyway!! LOL. Nice writing. Congrats on 8000!!!!! WOW!!!!!!  Lone Wolf Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
deVine. . . Congratulations on your 8,000TH!!! This is a wonderful poem. . . your words ring true for all of us. . . ------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Uh-Oh! Watch out...we're getting a philosophical bent [ain't it fun!] Let's see...I need to dust off a new shelf as PdV starts her next 8000 journey... Sunny ~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow. Helen Keller ~~~ When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Thank you all SO much for your kind words. I found this poem on my hard drive and wondered if I'd ever posted it. I'm not writing much these days it seems..a bit of a block! And thank you all for the congratulations...but if you read my post in Feelings you will know that YOU are to be congratulated! Take care! |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Ms. Poet, a wise message in this piece of writing ~ I'm glad you found and shared it ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Yes, I am glad you shared it too, Sharon! This is great! Congrats on 8,000 too! Denise |
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monique Member
since 2000-02-03
Posts 369Louisiana |
Wrote like a true sage monique |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Dear Sharon; How amazing are your talents and your wisdom! This is so true, no one really knows what is really in our hearts or understands our pain, only God and sometimes we do ourselves. Love, ellie Summers haunting melody that awakens the butterflies, calling them to join the dance in their silent song of praise to God. eL |
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