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Goddess Of The Night |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Goddess Of The Night ~*Marge Tindal*~ Goddess Of The Night do your magic on me Hold me enchanted in ecstasy Until curtains of the day open up on sunbeams dancing Hold me close in slumber of poetic romancing O' Goddess Of The Night scribe beauty with magic quill Upon the pages of a heart dipped from a friend's inkwell Thoughts of my making in magic of night Upon my awakening present charms of delight Flow from my heart finding a friend For there lies the beauty of my pen Goddess Of The Night with this heart-felt render Etch the hearts of friends so tender ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Marge again the beauty of your words brings a smile to my face and a song to my heart never say never |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Yes you are...congratulations on your 8,000th post!!  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Paula~ Thank you for the response. I like the idea of spreading smiles. PoetdeVine~ Thanks for the congrats ! Time flies when you're having fun ! And I'm definitely having fun ! !  I appreciate the compliment. I hope this came off as appreciating the 'Goddess' of my muse who works her magic on my thoughts in the night. Without the ink from others, I have no Houdini to perform ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
YOU RANG? Lol...but you knew that I would be here...thank you much, Marge!!! you are my late night poetess...always leaving me smiling...thanks. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Serenity~ LOL ! You answered !  Yep, probably did guess our muses were flirting around in these passionate halls ! Love ya' ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Marge, they say that people who talk to themselves are a little, er, off so you better stop!  No....don't  |
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Tennessee Angel Senior Member
since 2000-06-03
Posts 661Tennessee |
Oh Marge! I love poems about the night time. Thank you so much for your emails. It was so sweet that you noticed I hadn't been in here for a few days. I went on a little vacation for a week. And to be perfectly honest my muse has been on vacation longer than that. Having a bit of a dry spell I am. But anyway, this is a beautiful piece. I absolutely love it!!! |
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Rindercella Member
since 1999-11-12
Posts 64La La Land |
< !signature--> *If the shoe fits ... the castle is yours* [This message has been edited by Rindercella (edited 07-24-2000).] |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge--If you are up all night writing beautiful poetry...when do you get to sleep per-chance to dream? I do love you! |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Marge~ Your pen etched my heart True from the very start With your heartfelt poetry That each day I come to see Inspiration from friends Takes you to new ends How far will it go? Only you and your heart know The Goddess of the Night Has shown on me her light To light the darkened way Taking me to a better day Thank you from my pen A million times ten See that there star? I am where you are! **Still smiling** Love Ya, Lone Wolf Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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redheart angrybraids Member
since 2000-04-16
Posts 410honolulu, hawaii |
oh thank you for taking me there sweet one, i loved the last piece, simple lovely. Kindly, Redheart Angrybraids |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Balladeer~ YOU talking to ME ? You are my favorite flavor of silly ! TennesseeAngel~ Welcome back ! Glad you got a chance to have some fun ! Nothing like reading poetry to stir that little muse into action ! Rindercella~ Nice smile ! Back at'cha !Martie~ Shucks- When the muses come ... SOMEBODY has to make the coffee ! ! You're such a dear ! Doesn't EVERYONE sleep sitting up at the keyboard writing poetry ?? Love you, sis~ LoneWolf~ Now you got tears in my coffee. But, I'm smiling at the same time ! Thank you so much for the lovely verses ... means the world to me. RedHeartAngryBraids~ So pleased to see your reply, little one. Glad you enjoyed it. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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BSC
Moderator
Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Ah Marge....Our Goddess of the Night.... such beauty in the wee hours.... Simply awesome! Bonnie |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Bonnie~ Hello, friend ! Well, the midnight muses are the real Goddess's of the night ... but thanks for the compliment. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
So do we bow and kiss your ring or your ink pen? I think I would love to have a dip of my pen into that inkwell of yours. Great write and who cares if you talk to yourself. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Well, Mr. MarkB~ You can just kiss my royal ... .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. Gotcha' Hey I'm talking to YOU ! LOL ! Thanks for the fun ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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TerryW Senior Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 779Louisville, Mississippi, USA |
Marge~ Well, my dear, your words were etched into my heart, at least! I am so glad that I took the time to go back a few pages -- I couldn't have stood it if I had missed this one! {{Hugs}} Love Ya, my friend! ~you reached inside, you touched my heart, and I am all the better for it~ Terry A. Woodson, Jr. |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Marge, you are always so much fun. I agree with Bal, talking to yourself will get you talked about. But thats a good thing here. Parker |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
WOW I hope she works her magic on me as well...great imagery Marge a wonderful piece of workLove Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
You etched some tender on my heart with this one Marge. I don't know how I missed it before but I'm glad it came back up here so I could enjoy it. We're going to have to start calling you Goddess of the pen pretty soon. take care.......ethome..... |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautiful rendering, Marge! Denise |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
TerryW~ Your friendship is a treasure to me. Always my deep appreciation. Parker~ Tee-Hee ! If they're talking about me - they're leaving somebody else alone. Tracie~ Thank you for your sweet comments always. ETHome~ The Goddess of my pen is driven by the thoughts that others place in my heart. *Thank you all for your thoughts. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Oh Marge, How did I miss this? Such a delightful poem... regards, sudhir |
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Tramp Poet Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 754Could Be Anywhere... |
ooohhh Marge, this invokes an "Elizabethian" flavor for me! all lace and swirls and such... great imagry! bleeding... "Tis ink coming from his arm, Captain!" |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sudhir~ Sweetie, you found it .. that's all that matters. Thank you. Daniel~ Thank you for seeing the 'flavor' of it ... that's just how it came to me ... lacey and swirling ! I appreciate your sweet comment. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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