Open Poetry #8 |
I Got You |
Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Come here, Baby, put your arms around me.. Don't let go until we reach..... A brand new morning............. I just want to feel you next to me And know our hearts will beat in harmony... For all time.... All day long I dreamed of holding you.. Somehow you took control of all my thoughts.. Without a warning... So, lay right down and let me hold you close I'm going to rock you gently 'til tomorrow's sun begins to shine... I got you....So I'll keep right on believin'.. I got you....When I really need a friend.. I got you....You're my living proof that fate still smiles on dreamers.. I got you....And I am yours until... The End... Love received is equal to love given! |
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Michael G Senior Member
since 2000-06-25
Posts 579Nashville |
You got me with this one......... |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Sunny, that was wonderful! So beautiful! Sauni Sauni :) Have you ever known the color grey when the nighttime finds you weak I have, I've walked that road each time; that's where my angel sleeps |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Geez Sunni, This is a very nice one, makes me think. I am always looking forward to these special poems that you do so well. And your photo is very, very, very, nice. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
ok so you got me...now what you gonna do with me????LOL I couldn't resist the little tease. wonderful write. Keep sharing. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Michael......Thank you! and glad you like... Sauni........Thank you for reading this... I appreciate yours, too.... Love received is equal to love given! |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Lovely Sunny! This reads as if a melody should be placed to it ... very beautiful thoughts! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Bill....I always enjoy your replies, and I'm glad that you enjoyed my poem. Thank you for commenting on the photo...I had to take a crash course in graphics to do that one!! Love received is equal to love given! |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Mark....You're such a tease, but that's ok!! I'm glad you liked this one!! Kit.....Thank you so much! and you're right, it does have a melody. I write most of my poems while sitting at my keyboard. Wish I could play it for you..... Love received is equal to love given! |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Sunny1 what better songs than the ones from your heart...great work here girlfriend never say never |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Paula.... I really agree with you on this!! From experience, I've seen that the songs that people like the most are the ones that they feel, with all the different emotions. And...thanks for reading & liking!! Love received is equal to love given! |
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