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Sven
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0 posted 2000-07-23 11:42 PM


Melody of my heart, song of my life
I hear your spirit singing in the night
Touching my heart and healing my scarred soul
Your heart is the force that makes my life whole

The voice of your heart sings to me in dreams
Your shining face glistening on moon beams
My heart is lost in your warm, gentle eyes
They are filled with every star in the skies

Sing to me again tonight, song of love
Your voice rivaling the angels above
In your gentle hands take my wounded heart
And sing to me again, never to part

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


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Isis
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1 posted 2000-07-23 11:52 PM


Sven my God, this tugs at the heart strings... such yearning, such love, such pain....  Bravo you King of Romance you!!!!!
This just keeps pulling..  

I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn.....
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



Gossamerwings
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2 posted 2000-07-24 12:15 PM


Very romantic, sweet read!  
Well done!


Gossamerwings ;)

Paula Finn
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3 posted 2000-07-24 01:02 AM


What a romantic soul you have

never say never

Sven
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4 posted 2000-07-25 12:35 PM


Isis, thank you so much my friend. . .

Gossamer, is this better??  Thank you. . .

Paula, thank you. . . it's the only one that I have. . .

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


Gossamerwings
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5 posted 2000-07-25 02:37 AM


Yes Sven, much better!    Hugs.

Gossamerwings ;)

Cerenity
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6 posted 2000-07-26 08:56 AM


Hi Sven,

Your heart sings here, loved it.

Love, Cerenity


"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)

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