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Open Poetry #8

Heaven Unfolding

Michael G
Senior Member

since 2000-06-25

Posts 579
Nashville

0 posted 2000-07-23 11:53 PM

First a corner
Slightly bends outward
To the wind that takes
It's time and it's promise.

Under the corner
Finds a cheek of serenity
That smile for which
I have come from time.

The first layer is free
Of the strains of discontent
Completing her tranquil state
And owing nothing to me.

The second layer lifts
Easier than what was thought
Like sheding a winters coat
In time for the Suns love.

Her heart races forth
And touches my skin
The first promise of forever
And over me she has come.

Her layers come quick
Now nothing but two souls
That stand before each other
In an embrace that none can take away.

What answer does this give
What second did the world end
Nothing really matters for the moment,
Time stands, love continues ticking.

[This message has been edited by Michael G (edited 07-24-2000).]

Sunnyone
Member Ascendant

since 2000-07-06

Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England

1 posted 2000-07-23 11:59 PM

Michael.....
           What a lovely picture these
    words paint as I read. But my favorite
    line is.....

       "Time stands, love continues ticking"

             This was great reading!

Love received is equal to love given!

Saunni
Senior Member

since 2000-07-11

Posts 1777
West Virginia

2 posted 2000-07-24 12:18 PM

This poem was so beautiful and expressed so well. I enjoyed it!

Sauni

Sauni :)
Have you ever known the color grey when the nighttime finds you weak
I have, I've walked that road each time; that's where my angel sleeps

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

3 posted 2000-07-25 12:46 PM

I loved the slow gentle pace of this...like watching the sky slowly change before your eyes...beautiful.

Cerenity
Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 2637
Escondido-California

4 posted 2000-07-26 09:06 AM

Hi Michael,

SO much enjoyed this perfect peice.

Love, Cerenity

"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)

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