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Zion
Junior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 33
Melbourne Australia

0 posted 2000-07-25 10:02 AM


Can you hear my voice
I am calling out  to you
My call is a whisper so soft at times
A call so tender and meant for you
My call is a scream of pain as the storm gathers
The lighting flashs and the thunder rolls across   the heavens

My call is a giggle of delight as the golden strands of sun shine through
A call of delight
A call that is smothered by the pounding waves
   the surging seas
Distorted by the mists and twisted by the breeze

I call out but seldom do you answer
What was that I heard ?
An echoing sign a kindered spirit
My heart leaps with joy
My call is a song
I sing with joy and I whimper in despair
But I hear the vioces calling from so far away
What a surprise a shock

I see the light so far away showing me the way
I feel the cool wind blow on my head
My head grows heavy my sight fades
But the voices are singing they are calling to me
Cast of the chains lift up the blinds
Come sing with me sing to the voices so far away

Join me as I call to the shadows
    And scream for the light
Call the magical voices full of surprises
         Call With Me
         Call For ME

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ethome
Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
1 posted 2000-07-25 11:16 AM


Great poem! Sing to the voices so far away with these poetic words and we will comment on it here at Passions.

Take care....ethome

Paula Finn
Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546
missouri
2 posted 2000-07-25 02:15 PM


This one calls to me...how lovely the way you use the voice in your heart to call to all of us. This is wonderful work

never say never

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738

3 posted 2000-07-25 02:37 PM


So wistful, full of sweet yearning...oh, I know, I know...
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