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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Unwanted God... I feel... unwanted.. contrary..... unappreciated... and unnecessary.... Must you kick me down.. spoil my desires.... break my spirit... douse my fires?? I thought I found A Love so real but now I hate the way I feel. God... will you please be my friend and bless me once again... or is this the end?? Jameslee@July23,2000 |
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Gossamerwings Member
since 2000-07-18
Posts 207 |
I don't know if God reads poetry, but He does read your heart.  Love will come again! Gossamerwings ;) |
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Michael G Senior Member
since 2000-06-25
Posts 579Nashville |
James, God reads and understands my friend..Love does come again.... |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
never give up looking never...it could be the next person you see the next post you read... never say never |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
it's an awful feeling being unwanted... ~~soft hugs to you James Maureen |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
James what am I going to do with Hun. One day you are as happy as a lark and the next you have so many tears. As always you have penned the perfect picture of your despair. Hugs, Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
jmlee, What you are looking for is out there jmlee. Believe in it and it will happen for you. I could feel your sadless, as I read this poem. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Grossamer, Michael, Paula, Moonchild, Marina, and bill for your lovely responses. I'm just a guy looking for someone to love, but I will settle for a friendship right now...its true you know. Marina I have a need right now to feel the full range of my emotions...James |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
James* Such sorrow....poetry will push you in the right direction for healing and then the rest will follow, heart touching work~ |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
James, and that is what poetry is all about!!!!!!! So rage all you want!! Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Butterfly and Marina for your warm comments...James |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
James-I know the feeling well and never give up hope....it is all a matter of time. For now just hang out with your friends at Passions for a bit and tomorrow go out in the world with a big smile and an open heart.....you never know. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Mark for your nice comments..James |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I am beginning to not feel unwanted any more...I feel needed thanks to lovely Mina...James |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you God my friend...I appreciate your Love...James |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
James, this brought tears to my eyes, If only you knew how much I relate and feel unwanted and misunderstood sometimes. You express your pain well Melissa~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
damn! strong! |
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