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When I Talk To You (repost)
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When I Talk To You (repost) |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
When I Talk To You On the island of Oahu and in the city of Waikiki I've discovered a Special place that I enjoy immensely. It's here that I enjoy sitting on the edge of the warm salty sea feeling those tradewinds as they gently blow the fronds of the majestic palm trees. And while the rolling waves are rhythmically splashing onto the sandy shore that's when I begin to think of someone special..a woman that I adore. I believe she was always here in Waikiki and yet I never noticed her before til one day I was casually admiring some paintings in an art studio in Waikiki and she talked to me and we talked more and more. We talked about the regular things like art and travel and about friends and hopes and dreams about biblical truths and the fate of O.J.Simpson and the failures of Monica Lewinsky. And yet as I listened to her I felt a stirring inside me..an awakening.. and I realized that her conversation was enjoyable and more desirable than much fine gold to me. I found her conversation stimulating and her personality was fascinating and suddenly I could not resist telling her how fabulous she was looking. Charla...I'll always remember how warm and happy my heart feels when I talk to you. Jameslee@September27,1999 July23,2000 |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
jmlee12345, A nice way with words. I sense that you are very much in love my friend. Best of the best to you and her. |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Oahu...Waikiki...soft sandy beaches and that wonderful breeze...what memories you brought back with this James...how often I walked those beaches, strolled amongst that same artwork...lovely never say never |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Bill actually not Love just admiration..she is a manager in an art studio in Waikiki...I loved talking to her but we didn't hit it off as well as I would like...but it was fun trying. I still see her occasionally when I visit the Art Studio. Paula I was glad to freshen your memories. And don't forget that warm water...when I get in I never want to get out...James |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
YOU!!!! I can never keep up with all your women!!!!!!  It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Marina honest I don't have any women...but I am trying...lots of close calls. My woman would admire me and appreciate me and she would love to spend time with me... I believe a few women admire me...and some appreciate me...but rarely do we spend time together...I feel like that guy in the movie "Loser" his girl was crazy about a guy that wasn't really compatable and didn't appreciate her unique personality and it took the loser almost the whole movie to get noticed...yeah thats what I want...to get noticed...sorry I go on and on...don't even know if you'll read this...desperate for attention..ha..ha..James |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
You are NO loser Sir. I only wish I had someone who could express himself and have the love you have, to give. Hugs, Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Oh James ... this was just lovely! Your admiration for this person just shines through your words. Now ... on to your response above. (stern voice here) No way, No how are you a loser my friend! I've read your words ... your heart is strong and genuine James. She's out there, and she's still looking for "you" too! Smile gentle soul, you will find her!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Marina and Kit thank you for the nice responses...I guess that movie got to me a little bit but I'm alright now...James |
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