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I Speak To You In A Different Way
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I Speak To You In A Different Way |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England 
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I speak to you in a different way No need to use my mouth, my lips I speak to you with my heart I speak to you with my soul I speak to you, hear me! Hear me in a different way No need to use your ears, your eyes Hear me with your heart Hear me with your soul Hear me as I speak! I touch you in a different way No need to use my hands, my arms I touch you with my love I touch you with my hope I touch you, feel me! Feel me in a different way No need to use your fingers, your breath Feel me with your love Feel me with your hope Feel me as I touch! |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Very well done!..I know what you mean..there is an element of love that never needs any physical expression..it's just there and I think you have done a fine job explaining it. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
ethome, that's it exactly, sometimes something needs a different language than mere speach! This is about one of those times.  |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
You have firmly touched on the essence of a love connection...nicely written...James |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
James thanks, you know I admire your style, and in this one poem I think I may have actually got a shade of what I meant! ;- |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
WOW this is great I liked this alot...well done Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Marsha ... Wow ... this really reaches out and grabs ones attention beautiful beautiful poem  Rex |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Tracie, glad you liked it. I'm trying for a new feel in my poetry does it work is what I need to know? Rex, you know how I feel about your work, what I need to know is this new depth I'm trying to show does it come through? Any tips from the master would be greatly appreciated.  |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Marsha, I simply love the different slant you approached this from. I truly enjoy reading poetry when it's done from a different perpective, giving new life to the story. Since all stories have been written, it's how one re-writes them that makes the difference. You've done it well. The only thing I could have asked for was smoother flow...but very well done. And, yes, in your question to Rex, you came through. jwesley |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Jwesley Thanks for the input, how do I get the flow smoother though, I think I've only managed it once lately. Any tips from anyone of the masters who inhabit this world would be appreciated. ;- |
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