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*passion-fruit* Junior Member
since 2000-06-09
Posts 12 |
I sit alone day and night Wondering how to change my life Why does it always seem the same When all I want is simply change At times I wish I could end it all And if I do, is it my fault? Can you sit and blame me for wanting to leave When eveything in this world is meant to deceive So, should I find a way to end it now Or try to continue through it all somehow? |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
continue! the deciever is Lucifer and he wants to decieve you o yuh so he can have you o yuh!! nice poem welcome to passions you will indeed lose those frowny faces whilst your stay here is going to be the most uplifting sweet ride yuh ever been on methinks |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Welcome to Passions My motto...Live life to the fullest, make each day count. For we are not promised a tomorrow on this Earth. There is not one thing in this world that would be worth "ending it all" All my love, Jeffrey I lie awake in a world filled with dreams, but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Questions always haunt us, no matter what we do, But do ask them questions cos, thats what we are meant to do... .... Nice entry *passion-fruit* and WELCOME TO PASSIONS, may it be as fruitful to you a it has been to all of us ... Enjoy your time here, Regards, sudhir My heart is pounding, my stomach's inside out I'm feeling kind-a-shaky, my mind is full of doubt All I ever think about, is fearing fear itself, Wish I could unscrew my head and put it on the shelf Everything is twisted, everything is oh so tight, Don't know what I'm looking at, the lights are all too bright My brain's about to crumble, spill out on the floor Sweep 'em up. Throw 'em away, don't want 'em anymore Clouds race across the sky, day turns into night, Still there are the questions, no answers in sight Everything is twisted, everything is oh so tight, Starin' out the window, everything is just too bright Brain's about to crumble, spill out on the floor, Wish I could unscrew my head, and kick it out the door... You know I'm feeling kind-a....Strange You know I'm feeling kind-a....Strange ~ Strange ~ Joe Satriani (Flying in a Blue Dream) |
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*passion-fruit* Junior Member
since 2000-06-09
Posts 12 |
Thanks for all your support on my first poem. I'll be sure to look out for some of your poems too. |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Quite a powerful piece here PassionFruit  Coco |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Welcome to Passions, a great poem. A lot of questions you ask. The answers will come in time. We all wonder about our place in life sometimes we feel kings other times we feel like lost souls. ------------------------ "Take nothing but pictures. Leave nothing but footprints. Kill nothing but time". Baltimore Grotto "To be nobody-but-yourself-in a world which is doing its best night and day, to make you everybody else - means to fight the hardest battle which any human being can fight; and never stop fighting." E.E Cummings. "Art is a lie which makes us realise the truth." Pablo Picasso "You do not destroy an idea by killing people; you replace it with a better one". Edward Keating ----- |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Oh don't give in to that fruitless result. Life is not all deceit. There is good everywhere, just like the people on this board pouring out their heart. |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
Just remeber this...the ultimate quest in life is happiness.....find it and don't let it go!!! If you waste time trying to figure out if your happy or not it will be harder and harder to leave..I know this I learned the hard way....... it is your heart..look there.... that is where the answer is....take care of YOU! Julie |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Passion fruit, Welcome to Passions. You have made one deep dark entrance to our family. Great writing filled with strong emotion. The answer is continue on....in the end it will be worth it....you'll see. Looking forward to more from you. Lone Wolf Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
This is a very sad piece , Please find the faith to continue life has up's and down's dont let bad times get you down , look forward take life da by day most of all if you want change work towards it dont give up we have all felt this question. My thoughts are with you |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi passion-fruit, WELCOME-WELCOME to this wonderful family of passionate friends, I have learned alot about life here and one thing for sure you will love your stay, wonderful first post. Love, Cerenity |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
*Passion-Fruit*~ Welcome! Things are always better here in our circle of friends... I look forward to reading more from you! -SEA |
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