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vandana
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0 posted 2000-06-14 06:17 PM


What remains now,
Our love has ended,
Guess, nothing will remain now,
Since our love has died,

Now you're gone,
Here,all alone,
Calling your name,
When the love isn't the same,
Yet nothing has left for us to say,
When the broken pieces are shratted,

Here,
All alone in the dark,
What remains now,
My heart asks itself for,
What remains now,
Is only my broken heart,
It hurts so much,
When our love has died,

Guess what remains now,
Is my broken heart,
What remains,
Now is only my broken heart,
Your memories is with me,
What remains now my heart only ,

What remains nows
Is only my dreams,
What remains now,
It's my broken heart,
Only her love inside my heart,

What remains now,
Only her love remains the stay the same,
When I call her name at night,
What remains is only my heart for her,
What remains now,
Is your love only ,
In my heart


[This message has been edited by vandana (edited 06-14-2000).]

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Mike
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1 posted 2000-06-14 09:35 PM


Another sad one Vandana...   nicely written as always...
Aimster
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since 2000-02-19
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2 posted 2000-06-14 10:03 PM


~vandana
this is sad but beautiful. a broken
heart is very hard to "get over" but
in time i'm told the pain does get
easier. good luck my friend. take care
while you're healing.
amy  

 "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends."

"Fate exists but it can only take you so far,
Because once you're there
It's up to you to make it happen."




JamesMichael
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3 posted 2000-06-15 07:46 PM


Vandana I have been at that same exact place you write about many times and finally you come to the time when you let go and move on for your own sanity.   Then you will be free to embrace new opportunities to love.  James
Sven
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4 posted 2000-06-15 07:56 PM


vandana. . .

Just wonderful my friend. . . but there does come a time where you let go of the pain, but not the memories. . .

Excellent. . .

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


whiskey
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5 posted 2000-06-15 09:19 PM


Vandana, I think we all have been there before time does let you forget, Just hold onto the good times let the bad go , Wonderful poem  


Julie

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