Open Poetry #8 |
Loving Him |
louisianasweetie New Member
since 2000-07-16
Posts 9Metairie, Louisiana, USA |
I sit here loving him Wondering if he feels the same I wonder, then I start to think Why do I feel this way I ask myself that question everday Hoping he feels the same way Loving him is hard to do When I don't know if he's true If he is there's no need to ask All I've got to say is "He's the only one I think about day in and day out" I can't stop thinking about him And all I can do is pray That someday in the end I'll finally know how he feels But fornow, I can't help but wonder if he's loving me right now. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
"Loving him is hard to do if I don't know he's true." Precious sweet words...the same things I'm going thru right now with Lena...yes..someday I will finally know...James |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Lovely first post, I really love how you related your feelings in this poem. Welcome to Passions, please check your mail for a message. |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
enjoyed your poem ... I like to hear about people in love ... helps to put a little faith back in human nature welcome to Passions |
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louisianasweetie New Member
since 2000-07-16
Posts 9Metairie, Louisiana, USA |
Thanks to everybody that has read my poem. I think this is the best one that I have ever written. The weird thing is this is also the first poem that I wrote in my life. Live life to it's fullest, because one day you will be gone and you might regret not having done the things you've wanted to. |
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Richard McDonald Junior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 29Queensland, Australia |
I was in the same situation. Wondering if the love that I had and felt and was prepared to give was felt equally in return. If you love as much as you convey in your poetry then find the answers and have No Regrets. The answer given to me was no but I still have to regrets because it might have been yes and I would never have known. Looks as though you found and outlet for your feelings through poetry as I did. Well done! |
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