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beowulf_26 Member
since 1999-06-29
Posts 183
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Hello dearest, how are you now? You have soothed your wanderlust; yes? I have always loved you. Despite the greif you caused Me. Terrible. Covered by your blanket, tossing in our bed. I hold a charm of a Virgin. She has been sent to keep me company. Always. I guess dieties grow weary. I try to quell my disdain, forget the anguish you caused and yet I'm still haunted by inexplicable feelings of fondess, longing, lust, and love. Am I massicistic? Probably. Who else would subject themself to such torture? How poetic. Simply sickening. I'm not sure if I'm trying to fool myself when I assert or denouce my love for her. I know I still love her. Why won't she let me? < !signature--> Opinions are like bellybuttons: eveybody's got 'em and they're good for nothing. [This message has been edited by beowulf_26 (edited 07-26-2000).] |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
This is so very sad never say never |
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beowulf_26 Member
since 1999-06-29
Posts 183 |
The story right? Not the poem itself? |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Beowulf you took some time off from chasing Grendell to write a very interesting style poem. I thought it was very good and I found the sadness to be very caustic, leaving a strong mark on the mind. |
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