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Through Your Eyes (repost for book)
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Through Your Eyes (repost for book) |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song 
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--------------------------------------------------------------------------- ----- Through Your Eyes Through your eyes... I see much The depth of your soul The secrets of your heart Through your eyes... I feel all The warmth of your touch The gentleness of your kiss Through your eyes... I have love Sharing our breath Merging our hearts Through your eyes... I tell all My life given over To my trust in you Through your eyes... I offer this The respect as one The truth in love Through your eyes... I give to you The passage to me Through my eyes Mark Bohannan Thanks for the confidence in this one everyone and I did as you asked. It is now up for submission. I thank you all for your wonderful comments that you always bless me with. [This message has been edited by Mark Bohannan (edited 07-22-2000).] |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Mark, this is beautiful. I don't see "Submission" on my screen, though. Did you check the submission box? ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Claire, I thought I had so please try it now. I think it took this time.. Thanks for pointing that out. You are too sweet. |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Ah, there it is now. Thanks Mark. ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
your such a good poet... you submit so well lol voted with pleasure  jm |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Great work Mark you deserve my vote I must say. |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Of course something so beautiful should be included in this book, thank you for giving us the chance to vote  |
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Holly Member
since 2000-05-12
Posts 127Arkansas |
Mark- *click*...you just recieved my vote! NICE WORK HERE! I like your poetry...please keep posting. love & all, -Holly |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
JM-psst....Don't let it out that you know. I wouldn't want to be on hands and knees all day. A couple of hours on the other hand...LOL LOL..   Thank you for the push.ethome-A big thank you for your kindness. Bdc- It is I who thank you. Between you and Jm and the others how could I not. Your words and sincerity mean the world to me. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ah, there is the submission. Click. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MarkB~ Through your eyes caught in surprise a glance into your heart. Wonderful ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Holly- you snuck in on me. Thank you so much for the vote and the read. Sunshine- thank you so much. Marge-Ain't the eyes great worlds of their own!!! [This message has been edited by Mark Bohannan (edited 07-22-2000).] |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Mark, What a beautifully written poem. The depth of meanings are so real. Good luck on the submission. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Bill-thank you so much. As for the good luck on the book, I was talked into it. I personally think that there are many others more worthy of the chance. But, who am I to argue. It is a joy to me to find that people like my poems so much and it would be a thrill to be in the book but the most important is that my poems can be enjoyed as much as I enjoy everyone elses. |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
How I let this slip past I dont know but I am glad for the chance to cast my vote and send this back to the top again.. great work my friend< !signature--> never say never [This message has been edited by Paula Finn (edited 07-23-2000).] |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
i really like this one Mark. It is a perfect choice for the book. Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Beautiful again...and a vote! |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Paula-thank you so much. They do fly by fast some times and we have to search to catch up. Marina-your are too kind. thank you. Martie-thank you as always to your constant support and kindness. |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Oh Mark so glad you listened..this is just incredibly beautiful and deserves to be in the book...great work here Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Tracie-I do listen and I thank you so much for your continued kindness. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
yeah Mark, it is my pleasure to *vote* right away... regards, sudhir |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Sudhir-thank you much. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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