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Open Poetry #8

first love

eclipse29
New Member

since 2000-06-03

Posts 4

0 posted 2000-07-22 11:20 AM

my heart not loved found love in you
naive i was as i learned the ways
of love and hate and lust so true
a smile, no tears.  true love he says

gains and loses through the journey
things not so easy.  soon found trapped
lost and not knowing how to be
the life ahead all seemed premapped

to stand for one's self in mist of confusion
to care, love and give.  and hurt
in everyway i seem to be losing
pormises of what would be now apart

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2000-07-22 11:26 AM

Eclipse~
Welcome to our Passionate family of poets.

'my heart not loved found love in you'

This is a great line.
Enjoy your stay among us.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Sunnyone
Member Ascendant

since 2000-07-06

Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England

2 posted 2000-07-22 11:28 AM

eclipse......
             I really enjoyed this one! It
          does describe first love and all
          the doubt and confusion that go
          with it.......

               Very nice work!!

Love received is equal to love given!

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