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Open Poetry #8

I've lost

Dragon's Soul
Junior Member

since 2000-06-04

Posts 25

0 posted 2000-07-22 02:50 AM

I'm so tired

I can't sleep

I'm so hungry

I can't eat

I've lost my pride

Can no longer hide

I've Lost it all

and worst of all

I've lost you

Paula Finn
Member Ascendant

since 2000-06-17

Posts 5546
missouri

1 posted 2000-07-22 04:12 AM

such a sad sad poem...it hurts

never say never

Poet deVine

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

2 posted 2000-07-22 10:33 AM

I feel the pain from each line you write. This is very good.

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2000-07-22 11:35 AM

Dragon's Soul~
Would seem the fire has been diminished
within the soul ... of the dragon.

Hope is just a spark away !
*HUGS*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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