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Summerz Lazy Daze..zzzzzzzzzzzzz
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Summerz Lazy Daze..zzzzzzzzzzzzz |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England 
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Butterflies...Bumblebees... Sweeping weeping willow trees... cotton candy clouds adrift upon a turquois sky...... Frogs upon...golden pond... Lily pads just drift along... Lazy daze of summer all belong to You and I...... Gardens grow...don't you know... Weeds are there for you to hoe... Flower-Power blooming and the colors are ablaze... On the ground...lying down... sunbeams floating all around... Breathe in all the beauty of the Summerz Lazy Daze! Clear warm night...stars so bright... I wish I may...I wish I might... Catch a moonbeam with my heart and give it all to you... Light of dawn...night is gone... Mother Nature carries on... Making all the lazy daze of summer look brand new...... ~~~~~Live for Today~~~~~ taste every single moment |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Great writing Sunny!! I do enjoy summer for all of these reasons and soooooooo many more! |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Thank you, and I wouldn't expect a a butterfly not to enjoy summer!!!! You inspired this one, by the way.... (consider it yours!!!!!) Is there a bumblebee out there? ~~~~~Live for Today~~~~~ taste every single moment |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
although im an autumn girl...your summer almost won me over! very lovely indeed!! |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
poutprincess.... Autumn is my favorite, too, be cause of the wonderful colors. But summer makes me feel like I'm 10 again!! (No, no ages here!!!) Thanks for reading!! ~~~~~Live for Today~~~~~ taste every single moment |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Oh I love this Sunny, Wonderful writing, it sang to me  Oh how I miss my Lazy Daze of Summer  Though, I do love the Autumn too |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Sunny, Wow, I was going to reply to this poem but words escape me. You write over and over again, and I never know what to expect except that they all are excellant. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Dark Angel..... Thank you for reading! This just kinda slipped out, but it felt like Summer!! Bill..... Thank you, and I'm glad to know that I can keep you guessing...!! ~~~~~Live for Today~~~~~ taste every single moment |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Oh, how I love your summer daze. This was excellent and I loved the imagery that it gave over. Well done. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Mark..... Nothing like summer to take us back to happy times!! Thank you so much! ~~~~~Live for Today~~~~~ taste every single moment |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
perfect picture making poem...well done thanks for the pretty images Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Sunny, that was so wonderful and warm! I so enjoyed it. I love anything that is season oriented or anything to do with nature. It simply gives me peace. Beautiful writing there.....as always! Sauni :) |
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Michael G Senior Member
since 2000-06-25
Posts 579Nashville |
So very cool! I love it as makes me want summer ot stay....... |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Thank you so much, Tracie66, Saunni, and Michael..... I'm glad this poem put a smile on you, and I hope you are thoroughly enjoying your Summer!!!! ~~~~~Live for Today~~~~~ taste every single moment |
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Trew Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 365Ottawa, Canada |
Giddyup! Running through a meadow, stopping to play at your pond... (catch the frog!). Walking back through the fields and listening to the grass hoppers buzz. Ahhh... summers of childhood! Thanks for the trip back Sunny1, I needed that. It was beautiful! [This message has been edited by Trew (edited 07-21-2000).] |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Trew... I'm glad I could stir up some good memories!!! That's what this work was all about. I appreciate your reply!!! Love received is equal to love given! |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
what a pretty picture you paint...I just keep coming back for one more taste of your summer never say never |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
Wonderful visionary journey! Enjoyed the read very much. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Paula... Thank you, and you can come back to this any time you like. That's the nice thing about poetry...it paints a picture that doesn't fade!! Eloise... Thank you also......if I could give you some happy picture memories, then I am pleased!! Love received is equal to love given! |
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