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Michael G
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since 2000-06-25
Posts 579
Nashville

0 posted 2000-07-21 05:01 PM


No, she had said
And that word struck,
Took my last bit of reserve
Throwing it to dust.
No, and the world
could have become hell,
That it would have matterd
Made no difference to me.
No. So what I had
Thought to be wrong
Turned my life, my existance,
Inside of me, was all hers.
That what I thought
I had known, or could understand
She crashed my meaning when
She said,"No, I'm not ready for you to go."

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Sunnyone
Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England
1 posted 2000-07-21 05:40 PM



  Oh, Michael, I love this one!!! It had
  me going, and then......a surprise ending!

             What a pleasure!!!


~~~~~~~~~~Never~~~~~~~~~~
say
~~~~~~~~~~Never~~~~~~~~~~


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