Open Poetry #8 |
Breaking down |
Michael G Senior Member
since 2000-06-25
Posts 579Nashville |
No, she had said And that word struck, Took my last bit of reserve Throwing it to dust. No, and the world could have become hell, That it would have matterd Made no difference to me. No. So what I had Thought to be wrong Turned my life, my existance, Inside of me, was all hers. That what I thought I had known, or could understand She crashed my meaning when She said,"No, I'm not ready for you to go." |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Oh, Michael, I love this one!!! It had me going, and then......a surprise ending! What a pleasure!!! ~~~~~~~~~~Never~~~~~~~~~~ say ~~~~~~~~~~Never~~~~~~~~~~ |
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