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Cream, Ice
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Cream, Ice |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion 
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Cream, Ice How sweet that cream From vanilla beam licked from sugar cone or alone upon hot skin melting in on summer’s night a cool delight reacting to the taste of you custom flavor returning favor cold like snow spreading slow by sly tongue spring has sprung fountain to the core of you. © 2000 Corinne Bailey |
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ma miller Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 806 |
Ah, Corinne ... simplicity infects us all ... i love this to the cone (i mean core) ... great work ... [This message has been edited by MA Miller (edited 07-21-2000).] |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
steamy creamy and luscious...loved it!!! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
steamy cream, ice, I mean...lol...something's definitely in the air at the forum...enjoyed this way too much. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
mmmmmmmmm you scream....I'll scream... we all will scream for ice cream  lusssssicous C, melted my Drumstick-- it did LOL later-popsicle gator  jm |
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RAM Member
since 2000-03-24
Posts 153 |
mmmmmmmmm Core, how am I supposed to get back to work, now? LOL loved the use of rhyme, not too mention the content.  marks subtle commas placed amid spoken silences that punctuate us © RAM 7/21/00 |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
As delicious as an icecream cone on a warm summers day, this poem will melt a heart or two. why must we pray screaming? why must not death be redefined? we shut our eyes we stretch out our arms and whirl on a pane of glass-patti smith |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Corinne~ Oh, my ! Vanilla and Luscious And -  And -  Oh - So - Love it ! My favorite flavor ! !  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Thank you, MA, poutprincess, serenity, JanetMarie and Brian. Marge, you are too much, lady!!! RAM, this one's for you, sweet poetry man. Corinne |
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