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If I Would Have Waited On You" (part 2)
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If I Would Have Waited On You" (part 2) |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart 
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So many times I catch myself saying, If only, I would have waited on you, I often whisper those words so true, I remember when you spoke those words to me, I wanted to shout to the word with glee, If only, you would have waited on me, Our lives would be so much different, So much happiness and love, Every morning I would thank God above, For every kiss, every moment,with you, Sharing our hearts together, fresh anew, Seeing your smile,your face in the suns soft hues, We would walk along the ocean shore, hand in hand, barefoot feet in the sand, Feeling eachothers' love so grand, We would sing eachother sweet lovesongs, Songs we promised to sing, We would give it our all, everything, Eating at our favorite romantic restaurant, Laughing, teaseing, pleaseing, you love to taunt, One look into your eyes, I could tell what you want, I often sit and have these dreams, Dreams are all I can have, one or two, Every minute of the day, daydreaming about you, Our paths crossed for a reason a purpose given, Fate pulled us together across the miles between us, Now we are left holding decisions,love or lust? I often wander, what could have been? I should have waited for you, I ask for your forgiveness, Thats all I can do, For our love was meant to me, Written in the stars of eternity, You were the one who waited, waited for me.... And all I can say is I Love You! [This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (edited 07-21-2000).] |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
I really liked this! It's sad yet truly spoken from the heart! Thanks for sharing. Sauni Sauni :) Have you ever known the color grey when the nighttime finds you weak I have, I've walked that road each time; that's where my angel sleeps |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
"our paths crossed for a reason a purpose given" "written in the stars of eternity" sounds like you know destiny well...and you know that even though you may not have waited...love that is destined will never be lost....it will find its way back to you...beautiful work, very much enjoyed! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Beautiful poetry...Love the softness of your heart Romantic...I hope all your hopes and desires and dreams come true for you. James |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Part 1 I loved and Part 2 is just as tender and beautiful R.H. What a gentle soul you have~ |
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Kit McCallum
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
What a wonderful follow-up to Part 1 Romantic Heart, filled with such tender longing, love and sorrow. Just beautiful!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Thank You all for your sweet words of encouragement and friendship! means alot to me!! |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
Couldn't have been a better part two!!! I loved it.....a man has been chasing my sister for many years,,,,,very good friends they are but he wants more...I fear she may be reciting your poem later in life....thank you for the wonderful post!!!< !signature--> Julie [This message has been edited by JulieAnn (edited 07-21-2000).] |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
RH, WOW!!! Even more feeling than Part 1 had. This is beautiful and so heartfelt my friend. I loved it. If only . . . things were different and we could go back. I hope you find the love which you seek. You so deserve it. LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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