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Islands In The Sky
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Islands In The Sky |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California 
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Islands In The Sky Mystical places not yet explored, these islands appear to be floating freely with nothing holding them to the earth. Seemingly beckoning me to come, speaking to my soul saying you will find pure delight, your every fantasy will be for filled and your dream state will be understood. Come join us here in the heavens and quench your souls longing for adventure. There are fairy’s fluttering about, maidens fair, white knights on pitch black steeds and gentle giants with loving touch, so come join us here. Desired wisdom and knowledge that is here as well, flowing from hill sides like mike and honey. No man has left his mark upon this land for only those called upon will ever see these islands in the sky. You must hurry for as the mist dissipates and the fog rolls back out to sea, these islands in the sky will once again not be seen by human eye. I beckon thee now to follow your heart and come with us, for the God of all knowledge and understanding awaits your coming. Realizing my coffee cup is now empty, I take one last look out towards the valley giving my soul comfort because all that just appeared was but a dream, fantasy if you will, even so my heart feels refreshed and content. No sorrow here for tomorrow will once again bring the fog that will cover the valley floor leaving just the tops of the hills giving my mind a place to go and of course my dreams, desires and fantasies. By, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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ma miller Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 806 |
cool piece, cerenity ... fav line ... No sorrow here for tomorrow will once again bring the fog that will cover the valley floor leaving just the tops of the hills giving my mind a place to go and of course my dreams, desires and fantasies. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
cerenity.. Great work here....mystical and magical....words to dream with!! Fantastic work!! ~~~~~Live for Today~~~~~ taste every single moment |
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Walter Poe Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 787 |
Sounds like a wonderful place I can often find myself there in the night when i am alone with only my thoughts for company perhaps i am not alone then Maybe all around are the others those with similar dreams walking though my dream world trying to find their own way back From the unicorns gaze across a field of ochre haze and little Alice in the looking glass It is my place of escape the open lands beyond time Beyond the weakness of man where love and wisdom come to thr deserveing In it i feel as a bird free from the traps life sets no longer alone in a crowd now embraced on my own Oh Danny boy, the pipes, the pipes are calling From glen to glen, and down the mountain side The summer's gone, and all the roses falling 'Tis |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
HI MA,Sunny,Walter, Thank you so much for the really wonderful replys, and Walter I so much enjoyed the understanding you have in reguards to this poem and the dream state that one finds them selves in, I will look for you there. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Cerenity wow a stunning piece, take me to the island in the sky. I often look up at the sky in envy, wishing I could swim through the clouds. why must we pray screaming? why must not death be redefined? we shut our eyes we stretch out our arms and whirl on a pane of glass-patti smith |
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