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Michael G
Senior Member
since 2000-06-25
Posts 579
Nashville

0 posted 2000-07-21 04:40 AM


Shush, be aware
of all that I have,
my past, present,
and what I think, future.
Can you hear that?
'Tis my heart that goes
and beats blood to mind
making my world fear structure.

Shush, can you see
that what presents life
is not really a joy
if you are not near me.
That I am this far
from you soul and your touch
your warm serenity kisses
all of which I need.

Now, pray you, hush,
and do not be kind
for in doing so
would be hurtfull and unwise.
I have not the will
nor, I fear sanity left
to go on without you
for my heart feel the miles.

And could it be true,
that love does make
the learned man stupid
and the fool becomes great.
For if that be so,
then please, let the fool be me
for how can I live
without you near my heart.

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A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart
1 posted 2000-07-21 04:47 AM


WOW...so powerful!!!passionate!!!WOW!!!and a deep thought provoking question! LOVED IT!!!
This should be book submission!!!!

Janet Marie
Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

2 posted 2000-07-21 02:10 PM


Now, pray you, hush,
and do not be kind
for in doing so
would be hurtfull and unwise.
I have not the will
nor, I fear sanity left
to go on without you
for my heart feel the miles.

And could it be true,
that love does make
the learned man stupid
and the fool becomes great.
For if that be so,
then please, let the fool be me
for how can I live
without you near my heart.

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oh my..your just so damn good at this
poetry stuff  
absolutely perfect Michael...
very emotionally perfect
later-romantic-fool-gator
jm

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