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Open Poetry #8

She warms by a fire

Michael G
Senior Member

since 2000-06-25

Posts 579
Nashville

0 posted 2000-07-21 04:14 AM

She warms by a fire,
that is set deep in her soul
For which comes desire
and the dreams she enrolls
Of love so complete
that her heart cannot fail
The tempo of rhyme
for that tells this tale.

She warms by a fire,
that comforts her passion
Of a certain special dream
and the man that brings meaning
To a life lost on worth
that cannot be complete
Without the love of heart
and the words she desperatly needs.

She warms by a fire,
that creats her new heart
Bringing the flames of desire
to fingers that impart
A touch of skin
so pure in this carress
Of a lovers night
where the world dare not pass.

She warms by a fire,
on his chest, lay her head
The moon gently rises
as their love does begin,
And she sheds a tear
not for pity nor any pain
Just for her heart
and the fire in this man.

gem
Junior Member

since 2000-07-18

Posts 39

1 posted 2000-07-21 04:21 AM

This one really touches my heart!A good read..I really enjoyed it!
Gem

Saunni
Senior Member

since 2000-07-11

Posts 1777
West Virginia

2 posted 2000-07-21 04:22 AM

Awww that was beautiful! Just beautiful!

Sauni

Sauni :)

Lady Lost
Member

since 2000-07-13

Posts 470

3 posted 2000-07-21 08:50 AM

I love poems that make me cry! (sniff) This poem is so beautiful..I felt a connection with it..it realy did touch my heart, thank you!

You can never have too much fiction; reality can be such a bore

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

4 posted 2000-07-21 02:45 PM

Michael, this is exquisite
I adore this poem...
so graceful and tender..
sensual and longing..
the repetition is exellently used
its just perfect.
jm

There are places inside our souls -
that have never been touched.
There are places inside our hearts -
that need to be loved this much.
~jm~

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