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One Step Closer |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC 
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One Step Closer < !signature-->Amy M. Kennedy We're one step closer to where we want to be Only have today, yesterday is gone, tomorrow is not yet here My world changed the day you told me you love me Please believe in us, don't be consumed with fear I know you are scared, I am too This love though is stronger than both you and I No time nor distance can undo A love that was destined and approved by angels in the sky We're one step closer, to possessing the greatest love Just take a moment and listen to your heart I woke up this morning, you were the first thing I thought of Think we've both been graced by Cupid's dart We're one step closer to making our dreams come true Keep the faith, please don't give in Believe in me, as I believe in you And on the wings of a dove, we will find peace within "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends." "Fate exists but it can only take you so far, Because once you're there It's up to you to make it happen." [This message has been edited by Aimster (edited 06-13-2000).] |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
You've expressed yourself well here Amy ... I can almost feel the heartfelt desires pouring from your pen in this. Very nicely done! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Another sentimental beauty, very well expressed, Amy, you are flying with love's wings...and a great swoon air from warm breaths will help you soar even higher... Take Care, Sudhir |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Amy, you are very intelligent in knowing you can only travel far by taking one step at a time! This is a remarkable plea, and may Cupid's dart hit target every day! Sunshine ~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow. Helen Keller ~~~ |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
May be just me, but I think too many folks missed this one! Sunny ~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow. Helen Keller ~~~ When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Wonderful plea. Grasp it and hold on for the ride of your life. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
wow..I did miss this one... and Im so glad Sun brought it up so I got to see it... its WONDERFUL Amy... a beautiful love filled poem... and perfect with the wisdom of one step at a time...while holding on to our faith. talk to ya soon love ya jm you can say baby baby can I hold you tonite maybe if I said the right words at the right time you'd be mine baby can I hold you tonite Tracy C |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
This is a beautiful piece, my friend. I hope you both can take the next step! "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde "The robbed that smiles steals something from the thief" -Shakespea |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Graceful and Elegant just like you Amy  This was full of longing andlove and read beautifully~ Thank you so very much for always sharing your heart with your poetry...and with us~ |
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kat Member
since 2000-05-20
Posts 387 |
Amy: I couldn't have said it better. You've expressed what I also have in my heart. Beautiful! Thanks for sharing. kat |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
This is beautiful Amy......Feeling like there is something there.....getting closer to it,,,,,you could have expressed it better!!!!  Julie :) |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Wonderfully written Amy, lovely poem. why must we pray screaming? why must not death be redefined? we shut our eyes we stretch out our arms and whirl on a pane of glass-patti smith |
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