Sven's Challenge...Nothing Left Unsung

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Open Poetry #8

Sven's Challenge...Nothing Left Unsung

Paula Finn
Member Ascendant

since 2000-06-17

Posts 5546
missouri

0 posted 2000-07-21 01:59 AM

Melody of my heart, song of my life
   the wind brings your music to me
blowing through the branches of
   my faded memories
Whispering through the pictuers
   in my mind
Recalling all the treasures
   of a forgotten past
And the loves that I leave
   behind
Melody of my heart sing
   your song so sweet
Sing my life through the
   windows of time
Let each note recreate a
   cherished moment
A fragment of verse echoing
   endlessly
Held in the heart for
   a cold winters day
Song of my life let
   there be no regrets
Let there never be songs
   left unsung.

never say never

Saunni
Senior Member

since 2000-07-11

Posts 1777
West Virginia

1 posted 2000-07-21 04:43 AM

Awwww as always I enjoy your writings! I loved it!

Sauni

Sauni :)
Have you ever known the color grey when the nighttime finds you weak?
I have, I've walked that road each time; that's where my angel sleep

kaile

Member Ascendant

since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

2 posted 2000-07-21 01:04 PM

challenge so well met,Paula!!!...moi like the way you interwine the challenge phrase so well into your poem...it's like you have thought of the phrase yourself...it just fits so perfectly

thanx for the read...

brian madden
Member Elite

since 2000-05-06

Posts 4374
ireland

3 posted 2000-07-21 02:44 PM

Paula wonderful response to the challenge.

why must we pray
screaming? why must not death be redefined? we shut our eyes we stretch out our arms and whirl on a pane of glass-patti smith

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

4 posted 2000-07-21 05:50 PM

Just beautiful Paula. . .

"Song of my life let
there be no regrets
Let there never be songs
left unsung."

And let there never be melodies never left unheard. . .

Superb!!

-----------------------------------------------------

That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

Jamie
Member Elite

since 2000-06-26

Posts 3168
Blue Heaven

5 posted 2000-07-21 06:04 PM

ahhh.. the beauty of song...

Jamie

Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil.
"Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely".

Paula Finn
Member Ascendant

since 2000-06-17

Posts 5546
missouri

6 posted 2000-07-21 08:58 PM

Saunni...thank you I'm glad you like it.

kaile...it just all seemed to fit.

Brian...thanks I appreciate you reading me.

Sven...your phrase just spoke to me.

Jamie...hey brown eyes....I will sing to you...lol

never say never

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