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John Yaws
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since 1999-10-09
Posts 860
Texas

0 posted 2000-07-19 10:43 PM


I tried to tell you, the words wouldn’t come-
Pride? Yes, it must have been pride.
I stood, oh, so haughty, as you walked away-
And something inside of me died.

“I’m sorry”, comes easy, when it’s far too late-
A lesson I’ve learned in life’s school.
Good things don’t always come to those who wait-
There are exceptions to every rule.

Nostalgia is foolish, or so I’ve been told-
The past is now all I possess.
For me there’s no future, I’ve thrown it away-
My memories are all I have left.

Self-pity? I doubt it. No feelings at all-
No joy, no pain, no despair.
No plans, no regrets, and no place I must go…
I, honestly, really, don’t care.

So my aspiriations are to live one more day-
And put one day’s journey behind.
And see if, in passing, some lesson I learn,
Or truth, undiscovered, can find.



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Butterflies_dont_cry
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since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733
Michigan
1 posted 2000-07-19 10:58 PM


I'm quickly becoming a very big fan of your
work...I love the honest straighforward
style of your poetry and this piece is no
exception!  Great writing~

Gossamerwings
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since 2000-07-18
Posts 207

2 posted 2000-07-20 01:02 AM


I think you have already found it, Gunslinger!
Nicely written!  


Gossamerwings ;)

Meadowmuse
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since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263

3 posted 2000-07-20 12:27 PM


Gunslinger, another candid vignette. This one "got" to me.

Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau



Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

4 posted 2000-07-21 08:44 PM


If there is one thing in life that is certain it's that we can always learn something new every day. Another great poem, John. Sad but well written.

Denise

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