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Open Poetry #8

Big Happy Poem!

Jaysun C
Member

since 2000-07-20

Posts 56

0 posted 2000-07-21 01:49 AM

Happyness
are times and things made real
inocent eyes only grasp goden
flavored peel back and stare
as all pleasures intrcacies are made aware

I laughf because I care
and have so recently been there
jailed inside my mind
for reasons never made aware

everything should be so sweet
as release from conversation creeps
along lines through tendered minds
flows deep shivers extacy through-
craving spines
tired eyes gone looking for her presence-
to find
in thoughts through memories doth rewind
redeviors caught in nites sublime

please forgive spelling, sorry);

Saunni
Senior Member

since 2000-07-11

Posts 1777
West Virginia

1 posted 2000-07-21 01:54 AM

That was wonderful! I really liked it!

Sauni

Sauni :)

Jaysun C
Member

since 2000-07-20

Posts 56

2 posted 2000-07-22 01:34 AM

thank you Sauni, i am glad you enjoyed

tracie66
Member Elite

since 2000-01-18

Posts 4713
Australia

3 posted 2000-07-22 04:14 AM

Jay~
A most delightful read

enjoyed this alot
Tracie~

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

4 posted 2000-07-22 06:59 AM

Very refreshing! I enjoyed the read very much.
take care........ethome......

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