»
Archives
»
Open Poetry #8
»
In Rhythm With The Rain
| Open Poetry #8 |
|
In Rhythm With The Rain |
|
|
Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Humid breeze comes in ... 'cross window sill, summer storm breaks the silence of still. By candle glow ... jasmine incense burns ... lovers embrace, desire yearns. wine dipped finger tips, trace and tease ... slightly parted moistened lips. Butterfly kisses on lids of closed eyes, mouth on curves of neck ... bring on contented sighs. Jasmine and musk mix, sweet scent of glistening skin, touch this fire ... taste this sin. Hands caress ... small of back, bend of knee, bodies arch in ecstasy. Twisted sheets, legs entwined, pleasure found ... then defined. Rain dances on roof, in rhythm slow, lulls all to sleep ... satiated in afterglow. Janet Marie (OK me twin....is this better???   besides...you were having way too much fun LOL *wink-wink* sleep now sweet serenity... < !signature--> There are places inside our souls - that have never been touched. There are places inside our hearts - that need to be loved this much. ~jm~ [This message has been edited by Janet Marie (edited 07-21-2000).] |
||
| © Copyright 2000 Janet Marie - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Been missing you in adult girl!!!!!! This is very sensual and sexy JM! Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
||
|
serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Now she wants me to sleep!!! Ha!!! Revenge must be sweet Janet Marie!!! And I am in the middle of a drought here, below sea-level, talk about the humidity... Mmm. Mmm. I only thought it was hot before...this is classic Janet Marie, and dare I say it, Prime, JM...LOL.... Have we cuddled enough, or can I roll over and go to sleep now? LOL...Love ya much! |
||
|
Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Wow.....just WOW never say never |
||
|
Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Erotic and very pretty sounding, Janet Marie. ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
||
|
Jaysun C Member
since 2000-07-20
Posts 56 |
thank you for your words it reminds me of the times pleasures waves have rolled deep over me twisted sheets: the line that stays with me |
||
|
Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
JM- what is it about this one that tells me I will not be getting any sleep tonite. This is so erotic and sensual and it is put together in such a nice teasing way. LOVED IT.  |
||
|
Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Too Cool!!! Just too cool! Sauni Sauni :) |
||
|
poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
WOOOOO-HOOOO....this is something else..whew...loved it! |
||
|
tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
WOW I like your rhythm Janny....well done and excellent piece of writing Love Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
||
|
Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
SHAZZZZZZZZAM! Steamy, sensual and ohhhh so sweet~ Butterfly kisses on lids of closed eyes, mouth on curves of neck ... bring on contented sighs. Jasmine and musk mix, sweet scent of glistening skin, touch this fire ... taste this sin. Twisted sheets, legs entwined, pleasure found ... then defined. Rain dances on roof, in rhythm slow, lulls all to sleep ... satiated in afterglow. Ohhhhhh but this is wonderful writing!! Your muse and your twin have inspired you so very well! |
||
|
Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Oh my, oh my, sweet Janet Marie, Your passionate words speak breathlessly ... Oh husband ... get over here ... now! Best wishes (loved this!), /Kit |
||
|
Walter Poe Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 787 |
This describes it well that one perfect night we all long for with a person we desire more than any other. A dream unshackled by thought or deed. Words have such power sometimes they suprise even me with images unimagened. A true renaisance poet JM. Oh Danny boy, the pipes, the pipes are calling From glen to glen, and down the mountain side The summer's gone, and all the roses falling 'Tis |
||
|
Lady Lost Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 470 |
Gorgeous poem! I love this one! You can never have too much fiction; reality can be such a bore |
||
|
SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~JM,...stepping in line to give my praise. *Whistle*~*Whistle*,...hot damn gurl!!! Enjoyed. Be well JM. *Peace. |
||
|
Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Two thumbs up. This is exceptional and a pleasure to read Liz |
||
|
Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Whew! Hot and romantic stuff! Good job! Corinne |
||
|
Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Wow! Janet, you have realy sizzled with this one...beautiful, sensual images...lovely writing!! |
||
|
Trew Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 365Ottawa, Canada |
Woo-Hoo!! Incense, wine, storm... overload. Geez, do I have time for a cold shower? Wow! |
||
|
brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Jan this one melts candles hearts chills wines makes lovers weep in joy, I can always rely on your poem for beams of light and tenderness. Beautiful, Eve. why must we pray screaming? why must not death be redefined? we shut our eyes we stretch out our arms and whirl on a pane of glass-patti smith |
||
|
Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
thank you all muchly Im pleased you enjoyed.. i enjoyed writing it *smile* and the inspiration aint half bad either thanks to all who read and replied. take care sweet poets jm There are places inside our souls - that have never been touched. There are places inside our hearts - that need to be loved this much. ~jm~ |
||
|
Jan Member
since 2000-06-14
Posts 114 |
I just had to read this right before bed, kids asleep and all alone!!!! Yikes! Wow girl, this must be some inspiration! |
||
|
Alwye
Moderator
Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Very sensual and written so beautifully... Your muse seems to be on a roll my friend! *Krista Knutson* "You never lose by loving. You always lose by holding back." -Barbara DeAngelis |
||
|
bobbycat Member
since 2000-02-06
Posts 233USA |
WOW! This will teach me to take a 2-month leave!! I come back to read something like this....wonder what *else* I have been missing...? LOL Great poem, JM! Christina =^..^= |
||
|
ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Hey Jante Marie, it's the weekend and I get a chance to read some great poetry at Passions. So I thought I would start with my poet pal .......yourself...... You are being a little deviless in this one are'nt you. Temperature's rising things are entwining, curling up and getting cosy here. Whew! sensual or what! The old blues legend that just died Jimmy Whitherspoon sang a song about how he loved to make love at midnight in the pouring down rain. Ya can just see how connected humans are. You got it in you girl and you got to love it. PS Jimmy Whitherspoon sings with Van on the live album "An Evening In San Franscico With Friends," great album! |
||
|
JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Janet I find this poem to be sensational, sensual and superb...James |
||
|
Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Well, arn't we teasing all the men and women at passions. You gotta save these for the cold winter nights, its already so hot in here your going to burn us. Such a tease. Yes I've looked in the dictionary and beside the word tease is a pic of you..lol Parker |
||
|
Ethan Halo Senior Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 793on the roof again |
after this poem and the last one, i do believe there's a bit of the Love bug going around. and if it induces fevers like this, i hope i catch it soon! great painting you've done in this one. fantabulous, i say. simply put, fantabulous.=) "The bar is always open and the time is always right. If god's word goes unspoken, then the music plays all night." -Bradley Nowell |
||
|
passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
calming and soft |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
