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serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738


0 posted 2000-07-20 11:52 PM


Let them have their roses full,
dozens of them on parade...
for all I have, I offer you,
sweetness in a blush display...

A simple token of my love,
one tiny, perfect, pink rosebud!

© Copyright 2000 serenity blaze - All Rights Reserved
Paula Finn
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since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546
missouri
1 posted 2000-07-21 12:09 PM


serenity....more isnt always better...and one sometimes is all you need to show how much you care...this is sweet and compelling

never say never

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

2 posted 2000-07-21 12:10 PM


*bowing before my queen of metaphor*  
my my my...such a lovley garden you grow too  
so much said in so few perfectly chosen words
your just too good at this poetry stuff me twin...*winkie winkie*
very cool title me sweet
later-rose-garden-gator
me


There are places inside our souls -
that have never been touched.
There are places inside our hearts -
that need to be loved this much.
~jm~

Sven
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since 1999-11-23
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East Lansing, MI USA
3 posted 2000-07-21 12:16 PM


serenity,
         and just how well have you taken care of that rosebud??  

Wonderful my friend. . .

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


poutprincess
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since 2000-07-06
Posts 735
Perth, Western Australia, Australia
4 posted 2000-07-21 03:59 AM


this is perfect...i loved it!
Saunni
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since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777
West Virginia
5 posted 2000-07-21 04:12 AM


Awww you said so much in just a few words. That sure shows you are a excellent writer! I am slow at responses, but please understand I am trying to get to everyone...that was so nice....

Sauni

Sauni :)

spiked
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since 2000-01-13
Posts 873
Hammond, La USA
6 posted 2000-07-21 09:27 AM


Short and sweet as the nector you speak of.
Very nice Serenity
Rich

ma miller
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since 2000-07-11
Posts 806

7 posted 2000-07-21 09:28 AM


hi serenity ... beautiful little piece with huge heart ... thanks.
serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738

8 posted 2000-07-21 10:59 AM


I thank you all for your wonderful replies to my little ditty of a homage to a hot-house flower...good mornin' to all...serenity exits grinning...
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