Open Poetry #8 |
The Single Red Rose |
Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
This morning I opened my email.. and there, big as life on the screen... was a forwarded jpeg without any address.. So I clicked, wondering what it could mean.... It was a single red rose from a stranger.. Wrapped in ribbon, with droplets of dew.. I didn't think there would be any danger.. to leave the single red rose there to view.... I went through my day without thinking.. of the single red rose, and of who.. would be sending me flowers, not linking.. the single red rose up with you! For the last time, I opened my email.. and it all became clear (you will see), for with your letter of love, came a dozen red roses, and a question, "Will you marry me?" ~~~~~Live for Today~~~~~ taste every single moment |
||
© Copyright 2000 Sunnyone - All Rights Reserved | |||
Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Oh Sunny, you have really done it. This is so magnificent I can't say in words what I really mean. You are really something else with these writings. Keep them coming!!!!!!! |
||
Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Very sweetly done Sunny.....big smiles at the end! |
||
Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Bill...... Thank you, and your input is wonderful to get.....inspiring!! (girls always say "Yes" to roses!) ~~~~~Live for Today~~~~~ taste every single moment |
||
Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Butterflies... Thank you, and you might not believe this, but I just looked out my window and a butterfly just landed on my red rosebush!!!!!!!!! < !signature--> ~~~~~Live for Today~~~~~ taste every single moment [This message has been edited by Sunny1 (edited 07-20-2000).] |
||
Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
A wonderful positive addition to the poetry world. This had me going all the way to the end wondering what was next. Excellent write. |
||
Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Ummm.........YES What? This wasn't for me? (sob) Great writing my friend |
||
Elizabeth
Moderator
Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Very sweet! Elizabeth I'm grabbing my hat and coat I'm leaving the cat a note Quick call me a ferry boat-getting out of town! |
||
Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Mark... Thank you, and I like surprise endings, also!! Jeffrey... Thank you also, I do appreciate your reading this!! Elizabeth... Thank you.....your input is very appreciated.... ~~~~~Live for Today~~~~~ taste every single moment |
||
Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
how romantic! Nice job on this one! Corinne |
||
ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
very very romantic on line even.....I thought this was refreshing and upbuilding poetry with a happy ending........very well written and I hope it works out for you......take care...........ethome..................... |
||
Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
I dont know how I missed this one but back to the top it goes for another look..I love it never say never |
||
Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Corinne.... Thank you, and I'm glad you liked!! ethome.... It's always what we make it... Thank you for your kind words! Paula..... I always feel good when you like something I wrote....thank you for making my day brighter!!! Love received is equal to love given! |
||
Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Sunny, Your heart of joy shines brightly here, awesome work, so much enjoyed. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
||
Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Cerenity.... Thank you for your reply....I really am glad that you liked this!! Love received is equal to love given! |
||
JohnDLeclare Junior Member
since 2000-07-26
Posts 43 |
I'll carry a picture of a rose and a smile with me the rest of the day ! John D LeClare |
||
Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi John... Nice to meet you, and I want to thank you for your reply!! I'm glad this could give you a smile today....... Has anyone said: "Welcome to Passions"? Well, if not...I just did!! Love received is equal to love given! |
||
angelswing Senior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 705United Kingdom |
Always the way - can't say i've had the problem yet though . Enjoyed it as always . Truly a master piece . Your work always seems to inspire me . L.of.L. Tom . Don't try, do or do not, there is no try . - Master Yoda - |
||
ddgoose Member
since 2000-07-25
Posts 250Baltimore, MD, USA |
Sunny1 Very refreshing and nicely done. A memory you can keep forever. |
||
Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Tom......Thank you for reading, and the nice reply...... ddgoose....I'm glad you enjoyed this one Thank you both so much! Love received is equal to love given! |
||
⇧ top of page ⇧ | ||
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. |