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bartlo16
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since 2000-07-10
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0 posted 2000-07-10 08:42 PM


   "A MOUNTAIN DREAM"

I know of this place in the mountains,
Way up high in the sky.
Overlooking the valley,
Where we can watch the eagles fly.

Together we would see the sunrise,
Coming up in the east far away.
Holding hands together as we stand there,
Touching, in the early morning of the day.

I held you tight as we embraced,
A cool breeze touched our skin.
But I found that I was only dreaming,
When I opened my eyes again.

A tear welled up inside me,
And came down my face so wet.
As I remembered the first time you kissed me,
One I won't ever forget.

Your lips are moist like the morning dew,
Ruby red and soft, just like a rose.
I can still see you there,
Just like a picture pose.

I know that I'm not dreaming,
But you are so far away.
If I were to only see you,
It would be a very special day.

A romance made in heaven,
For only you and I.
Let's take our special moments,
And pray we would never say goodbye.

One year I promise you happiness,
Will you consider five or many more?
Let me love you totally,
That's all I would ever ask you for.

Bill Charles



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Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06
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1 posted 2000-07-10 09:19 PM


Welcome to Passions!!!

I enjoyed this.

Kathleen

ddgoose
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since 2000-07-25
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2 posted 2000-07-26 07:35 PM


Bill

Such beautiful words coming from your soul.  It is very difficult for some people to put such words together and you have done a great job.

Bill Charles
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3 posted 2000-07-26 07:54 PM


dd,
Thanks for finding this one and replying with your kind comments.

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