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Effigy Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 486disbelief 
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Maybe dreams are the thrue reality, and what we think is real, isn't real at all. Life could be complete delusion, just an obscure doodle on some school child's notebook. I know that I don't really feel real. I'm not so sure I'm even alive. All of human knowledge... erased with a number two pencil, everything fading in a blink of an eye on a child's fanciful whim. Nothing and everything, all that we know, imagination, a toy to fight off a child's rainy day bordom. After all, what is reality anyway? Nothin' but a collective hunch. |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
~this was very interesting and intriguing! you have put down some very thought provoking questions. there are so many questions to life and our exisitence and so little answers. But it is my theory that the power who put all this into motion, wants it like that  take care.amy "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends." "Fate exists but it can only take you so far, Because once you're there It's up to you to make it happen." |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Hey there,...ooohwee...I hate to sound so unoriginal...but I have thought these thoughts....Not just thought, I think these thoughts often. Does that make sense? Anyhow,...super poem to say the least. Well written. *Peace. |
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Effigy Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 486disbelief |
SpitFire - I think that we all have these thoughts at one time or another. You are no more unoriginal as the poem is. Thanks I'm glad you enjoyed it. After all, what is reality anyway? Nothin' but a collective hunch. |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
Daydreams become real Your reality they steal Where are you going While the wind is blowing The leaves are falling Reality is calling RING! RING! Think I'll sing Here I am Traffic jam I think I love her (SMASH!! NOT ANOTHER REARENDER!) |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
I relate to this one far too much Effigy ... I love the way you expressed these thoughts, terrific comparison! Somedays I just feel like that little hand "half erased me" ... really well done! Best wishes, /Kit |
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angelswing Senior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 705United Kingdom |
I thought I was the only person in the whole of the world that thought like that and am the only person I know well who sees that life is all in the mind, Now I see I am not the only one, thank you very much for being in agrement with me . Very nice poem . L.of.L. Tom . Insanity is a perfectly normal responce to an abnormal world -R.D.Laing.- |
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forne_marin Member
since 2004-04-13
Posts 140Spartanburg, South Carolina |
Creepy. I like it, but you mispelled "true" in the first line. |
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