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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Odd I dream of her in odd embraces. In secluded and hidden places We walk entwined like subtle rhyme. And plan and talk of future time. We eat from out the wishing dish. And one would think it was hashish. We walk upon a rainbows span Just sweeping stars into a pan. Our heads forever in the clouds Just lacing silver from the shrouds. And fly away to fantasy To taste a bit of ecstasy. We reach a balm this grace and charm. We're not asleep there is no harm Adults of mutual consent, Far from realities content. Although it may not work for you. It works for us, it's what we do. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
"We eat from out the wishing dish. and one would think it was hashish..." My goodness, but you guys are certainly inspirational t'nite! This is delightful...hmmm...gives me certain cravings...lol... Nice work, seymour! |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Seymore.... I don't see anything odd about this! I liked the mystical quality, and the only problem I had in reading this is that now I have the munchies!!!! This was fun to read..... ~~~~~Live for Today~~~~~ taste every single moment |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Serenity, Thanks for the delight. Sunny1, By all means have a munch. Thanks |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Seymour~ the last thing this is, is odd! Wow! Very cool!  -SEALive,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sea, Thank you so much. |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
I have said before, Seymour, how unique a style and gift you bear. This is, indeed, odd ~ delightfully so! Wonderful writing! ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ 'Odd' - indeed. And oddly enough I not only understand it ... but oddly enough it likes me ! Oddities-R-Us ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Oddly beautiful, Seymour..and I oddly loved it!! ~~soft smiles Maureen |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Odd that he would see in me my vision of his fantasies... {~,^} thank you Sy! Sunny ~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow. Helen Keller ~~~ When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
A very interesting poem, an intimate glimpse, thanks for sharing with us. Corinne |
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