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Waterfalls and You
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Waterfalls and You |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now 
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“WATERFALLS AND YOU” I walk down this path in search of you, Stumbling along over this ground. The trees were staring at me, and dancing with the wind, A love to find one day perhaps, but then again it may never be found. At the end of the path I saw you there, Under the waterfalls, naked, and I stared. The sun shone on you through the trees, In my heart knowing that I still cared. A stream of water cascading over your presence, Showers wet, and running through your hair. Shining and sparkling like diamonds in the sunlight, Remembering all those nights when I stared. Your head tilted back to show your soft gentle lips, There was a time when I knew them so well. But now they were moist from the droplets that fondled you, No, not moist from mine, as these lips now would never tell. Your shoulders glistened with the moisture, From the spray high up above, And your breasts soft with the mist, Tender and sweet like turtledoves. As the stream flowing over the falls caressed you, Your body was soaked through and through. I could see your long legs reflecting the light, Of the rays of the morning sun that was wooing you. I called your name and you came out of the flow, Walking towards me tenderly and meek. We embraced and I was at a loss to where you had gone, Your fingers hard against my lips, I can’t speak. You lay with me, touching, holding so tight, But what madness this was to meet you again face to face. Your lips held to mine with all your temptations, Inviting, daring, and teasing me, with your warmest embrace. There would be no turning back I knew it now, From passions released this morning with you. You cried to me with all of your delight, And I again felt all the despair that I knew. We slept in loving arms that night, Knowing that when I closed my eyes. You would leave me once again my love, And in my heart I would never know why. And so again, I walk down this path, searching for you, Stumbling along over this ground. The trees were still staring at me, and dancing with the wind, A love to find one day perhaps, but then again it may never be found. Bill Charles |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Bill...... Oh my!!!!! I'm at a total loss for words to tell you how great this is!!!!! This has got to be the sexiest thing that I've ever read in word form........it's absolutely beautiful, and flows like the cascading water coming down the falls. Now, I've got to go take a cold shower!!!! This is magnificent, Bill!! ~~~~~Live for Today~~~~~ taste every single moment |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Sunny1, Oh my goodness, now I've done it, a cold shower no less!! I do look forward to your replies, as you know, and they always tell how one of my writings really are. Thank you very much Sunny. I always wanted to write something special, and maybe just this once I have. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
This was a beautiful trip that you just took me on. I was captured by the intense intimacy of the story. Excellent poem, just loved it! |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Ethome, Thank you for the kind words. An intimate poem as you mentioned. And I thank you again for taking that trip. |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Very sensual waterfall! Impressive imagery penned in this piece~ |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Butterflies_dont_cry, I appreciate your kindness with your words. Thank you Butterflies_dont_cry. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Bill, this is the first I've read of yours!! welcome to the forum what a rush please stay!!! Kathleen |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Wow! That was incredible how that was all put into words! That was beyond GREAT... Sauni Sauni :) |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Kathleen, Thank you for stopping by and reading my poem, and also for the kind words. Thank you too for the welcome, and I would love to stay, and plan on doing so, as long as my fingers can touch this keyboard. Saunni, Thank you for reading and sending me a reply to my poem. I appreciate the comments that you made. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Bill~ Simply seductively sensual ... stunning! 'I could see your long legs reflecting the light, Of the rays of the morning sun that was wooing you.' You definitely 'wooed' me with this presentation of beauty in it's flow. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Can someone please pass me a tissue?...  HUGS |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Marge, Geez, I don't know what to say except to thank you for liking my poem. What a rush to hear words from you like this, especially when I am not that experienced at writing. RainbowGirl I can share a whole box with you if you need them. Just kidding. Thanks for reading this poem of mine, and for your tender response that has so very much meaning to me. |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
I think you captured what is probably the hardest part of love...being able to let go...."a love to find one day perhaps,but then again it may never be found." never say never |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
STEAMY! passionate....wow...loved this....whew! |
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Beth Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 468WA, Australia |
~Oh, this was sensational. You are so gifted with words. Makes me wanna feel like i was there. Thankyou for allowing me the pleasure of reading this superb piece~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I enjoyed reading this excellent poem...James |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Superb imagery and a deep sense of emotions and sensuality. Great write. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Paula Finn, Thanks Paula Finn for reading and replying to my poem. I agree that it is very hard to let go, and you are so right, never say never. poutprincess, Thank you for the comments, your words are packed with punch! Beth You are very welcome, and I thank you for taking your time to read something that I have written. Believe it or not, I felt as if I were there writing this. Goodness!! jmlee12345 Your comments are always rewarding to me. Thanks for the reply. Mark Bohannan, Thank you Mark for taking the time to reply to this poem. I do appreciate it. |
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