Open Poetry #8 |
I want to learn about you (sorry about the double post my computer glitches sometimes) |
JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
I want to get to know you I want to learn about you I want to feel you watching me as I cross the floor I want to hear you laugh I want to see you cry I want to see right through your shy blue eyes I want to get to know you Not like any other I want to learn about you I want to know what makes you smile I want to find the time to talk a while I want to get to know you I want to learn about you I want to hear you sigh I want to see the sunrise in your eyes I want to get to know you I want to learn about you I want to know your dreams I want to hear you fears I want to be part of your fantasy I want to get to know you I want learn about you so quiet and shy I believe you and I could fly I want to get to know you I want to learn about you I want to see inside your heart I want to look into your soul maybe it's you that could make me whole I want to learn about you I want to get to know you got to get you away from here then maybe we could start to share I want to get to know you I want to learn about you never hurt you never desert you I want to learn about you I want to know whats on your mind I believe you may be one of a kind I want to learn about you Julie [This message has been edited by JulieAnn (edited 07-15-2000).] |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
My computer submitted this twice I am not sure why I will have to find out....sorry Julie :) |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
JulieAnn...everyones desire all wrapped up in your words...glitch or not its well worth the read never say never |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
JulieAnn~ this is beautiful and so very sweet! Who ever it's for, they should see this. -SEA (by the way glitch's happen,I've done a few! No one will mind ) Live,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209 |
this is so softly beautiful...very very nice, like it a lot.....mmmmmmmmm leaves me remembering when I had such a dreamy "i want you" feeling...... |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
JulieAnn* Such pure and tender "wants"...not to much to ask of love. Beautiful piece~ |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Such simple request for that of a true love. This is beautifully written and I enjoyed it much. |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
Thank you for oyur replys,,,soory no replys from me lately...I have been extremely busy....will get around to it soon.... |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
I agree, it's great to have that 'wanting to know you more' feeling.. Nice writing sweetheart.. HUGS |
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