Open Poetry #8 |
Love me now.............. |
Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Love me now........ Come feel the gentle beating of my heart.. Talk to me......... Say that we will never be apart.. Touch my lips...... Taste the sweet desire of my wine.. We will be......... As one throughout this life and for all time.. ---------------------------------------------------- Does anybody know how long tomorrow's going to be? Is somewhere there a guiding light to shine for you and me? And if there is a never, than what is forever for? I can't love you any less but I can give you more.... ---------------------------------------------------- Take my love....... Let me cause your cup to overflow.. Look at me......... In my eyes you'll see our sweet love grow.. Nourish me......... and I will feed your soul throughout all time.. Love me now........ and know that I am yours, and You are mine.... ~~~~~Live for Today~~~~~ taste every single moment |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Sunny1, These words flow from your heart, and you write them so tenderly and with much feeling. It is a pleasure to read what you write, and I look forward to the next. "Love me now........ and know that I am yours, and You are mine...." Phew, Whew, and WOW!!!!!!! |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Thank you, Bill. Do you remember what you said about writing more romantic poems? Well, thank you for the inspiration!! ~~~~~Live for Today~~~~~ taste every single moment |
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Beth Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 468WA, Australia |
~Sunny1...This was brilliant...This was so loving and inspirational...It makes me want to fall in love all over again....~ |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
I agree with Beth...this makes me feel like falling in love all over again, too! |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Beth and PoutPrincess...... It's OK!! The world needs more people to fall in love all over again!!! Thank you for reading!! ~~~~~Live for Today~~~~~ taste every single moment |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Love me now........ Come feel the gentle beating of my heart.. Talk to me......... Say that we will never be apart.. Touch my lips...... Taste the sweet desire of my wine.. We will be......... As one throughout this life and for all time.. "Sighhhh" Loved it Sunny |
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ma miller Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 806 |
Does anybody know how long tomorrow's going to be? this is one of those "I wish I had written that" phrases (and i do) ... nice work. |
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Trew Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 365Ottawa, Canada |
Sunny1, this is great romance! Gentle, but strong, just like love itself! |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
Sunny1-Very beautiful, full of love and tenderness. |
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