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bird cat dog ... (more simplicity)
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bird cat dog ... (more simplicity) |
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ma miller Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 806 |
bird cat dog ... to be the bird up in the tree would be the thing to set me free of daily doings of this and that but left to me would be the cat to be the cat up in the tree would be the thing to set me free of work and toil that clouds and fogs but left to me would be the dog to be the dog up in the tree would be the thing will you agree i least want most to bring the end on this fine day to man's best friend M.A. Miller 07.18.00 < !signature--> My calling before me, let quill be my offering; For to be called poet, no greater gift to receive. M.A.M. [This message has been edited by MA Miller (edited 07-19-2000).] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
you are on a simple roll here...I used to talk to my dog all the time, I told him one day, "in our next life, I GET TO BE THE DOG." lol--and thank you for the much needed smiles today.. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
MA....... Loved this and how the simplicity made such a big statement. Your work is fun to read!!!!, (it's good to see pets written about, too.) ~~~~~Live for Today~~~~~ taste every single moment |
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ma miller Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 806 |
serenity and Sunny1 ... sometimes i get tired or thinking so hard about my writing, that i just have to back off and do some fun things (like most of today) ... thanks again for reading ... |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MAMiller~ This is a delightful piece. I can just see it flowing with ease to the page of play. Cool ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Simple, yes, and quite clever. I enjoyed this one. Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Cool indeed! you are on a "easy" roll... MA Miller.. enjoyed this one quite a lot... regards, sudhir |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Totally cool poem! Corinne |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Excellent read MA Miller! Much enjoyed the light hearted flow and rhythm in this happy verse ... great poem!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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ma miller Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 806 |
thanks to all above ... certainly am glad light-heartd flies well here too ... |
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