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Release The Falcon
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Release The Falcon |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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Trace of finger feathered thigh, a whispered kiss in cleft surprise... simple salt upon my tongue dewdrop of the morning come... to feel your chest pressed next to mine, entwined, our bodies serpentine-- desire in a fire, rage-- take me, turn another page... release the falcon hunt the sky... make me yours, I make you mine. And no, I'm not the least surprised. I spied the sweetness in your eyes... Now I want, no, need you, more... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Trace of finger feathered thigh, a whispered kiss in cleft surprise... simple salt upon my tongue dewdrop of the morning come... to feel your chest pressed next to mine, entwined, our bodies serpentine-- desire in a fire, rage-- take me, turn another page... ============== And no, I'm not the least surprised. I spied the sweetness in your eyes... Now I want, no, need you, more ============= OH BABY!!!!!!!!! my my my ...we are so ~sweetly~ inspired... mmm mmm mmm I do so like that Mardi Gras heat and cajun spice... *doing a little happy dance at the screen* *blowing kisses to the south* me thinks it gonna be a bayou steamy summer  me loves ya when your smiling later-spicy-craw-dad-gator hehe me There are places inside our souls - that have never been touched. There are places inside our hearts - that need to be loved this much. ~jm~ |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
craw-dad-gator? You do know the sayin' don't ya? "suck da heads, squeeze da tails..." love ya much...me twin'. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Serenity, Very sweet poem!!! I like this very much. Great way to start the morning.  Nice writing. LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Thank you Lone Wolf---sweet is good. I like sweets. [This message has been edited by serenity (edited 07-19-2000).] |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
It is 1220am---I am alone-- All I needed was to read beautiful erotic poetry to help me sleep....lol Well written-- Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Sweet AND Steamy...who say you can't have both!!! Great work!! |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
serenity, there are words to say how much I like this one. . . but they would take up a lot of space. . . Simply inspired my friend. . . ------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Trace of finger feathered thigh, a whispered kiss in cleft surprise... simple salt upon my tongue dewdrop of the morning come.. WOW Serenity WOW!! Love it! |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Wow ... serenity I'll take a double helping of your thoughts lovely lovely poem |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
very sexual even hot. We been lighting fires of late? Great writing well inspired Rich |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Are you sure you wanted to say Release the Falcon??? My My so misleading is the title... I thought you really are going eagle-eye- cherry ways... flying kites and eagles in the heavenly skies et al... and what did I find... a sensuous poem... serpentine entwining... hmmmm makes me wonder about your state of mind... before I start being rude (and lewd - don't read that kids), I will simply say, nice work... regards to you serenity, sudhir |
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ma miller Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 806 |
I'm off to take a cold shower, serenity ... love every word ... thanks. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Wanted to thank you all...and send this one back to play on the same page with m'lusty twin...winky-wink to Janet Marie!!! |
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