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serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
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0 posted 2000-07-18 07:33 PM


Trace of finger
feathered thigh,
a whispered kiss
in cleft surprise...
simple salt upon my tongue
dewdrop of the morning come...
to feel your chest pressed next to mine,
entwined, our bodies serpentine--
desire in a fire, rage--
take me, turn another page...
release the falcon
hunt the sky...
make me yours,
I make you mine.
And no, I'm not the least surprised.
I spied the sweetness in your eyes...

Now I want, no, need you, more...

© Copyright 2000 serenity blaze - All Rights Reserved
Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

1 posted 2000-07-18 09:11 PM


Trace of finger
feathered thigh,
a whispered kiss
in cleft surprise...
simple salt upon my tongue
dewdrop of the morning come...
to feel your chest pressed next to mine,
entwined, our bodies serpentine--
desire in a fire, rage--
take me, turn another page...
==============
And no, I'm not the least surprised.
I spied the sweetness in your eyes...

Now I want, no, need you, more
=============

OH BABY!!!!!!!!!
my my my ...we are so ~sweetly~ inspired...
mmm mmm mmm
I do so like that Mardi Gras heat
and cajun spice...
*doing a little happy dance at the screen*
*blowing kisses to the south*
me thinks it gonna be a bayou steamy summer  
me loves ya when your smiling
later-spicy-craw-dad-gator hehe
me


There are places inside our souls -
that have never been touched.
There are places inside our hearts -
that need to be loved this much.
~jm~

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738

2 posted 2000-07-18 09:20 PM


craw-dad-gator?  You do know the sayin' don't ya?  "suck da heads, squeeze da tails..."   love ya much...me twin'.
Lone Wolf
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since 2000-03-16
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Lansing, MI USA
3 posted 2000-07-18 09:21 PM


Serenity,

Very sweet poem!!!  I like this very much.  Great way to start the morning.  

Nice writing.

LW


Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats

serenity blaze
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4 posted 2000-07-19 12:15 PM


Thank you Lone Wolf---sweet is good.  I like sweets.

[This message has been edited by serenity (edited 07-19-2000).]

Jamie
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since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168
Blue Heaven
5 posted 2000-07-19 12:21 PM


It is 1220am---I am alone-- All I needed was to read beautiful erotic poetry to help me sleep....lol
Well written--

Jamie

Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil.
"Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely".


Butterflies_dont_cry
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since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733
Michigan
6 posted 2000-07-19 12:22 PM


Sweet AND Steamy...who say you can't have
both!!!  Great work!!

Sven
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since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA
7 posted 2000-07-19 12:25 PM


serenity,
         there are words to say how much I like this one. . . but they would take up a lot of space. . .

Simply inspired my friend. . .

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095

8 posted 2000-07-19 12:31 PM


Trace of finger                         feathered thigh,
a whispered kiss
in cleft surprise...
simple salt upon my tongue
dewdrop of the morning come..

WOW Serenity WOW!!
Love it!

Rex Allen McCoy
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since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863
Sippin a Timmy's in London
9 posted 2000-07-19 12:31 PM


Wow ... serenity
I'll take a double helping of your thoughts
lovely lovely poem

spiked
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since 2000-01-13
Posts 873
Hammond, La USA
10 posted 2000-07-19 02:04 AM


very sexual even hot.
We been lighting fires of late?
Great writing well inspired
Rich

Sudhir Iyer
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since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium
11 posted 2000-07-19 11:26 AM


Are you sure you wanted to say Release the Falcon???

My My so misleading is the title... I thought you really are going eagle-eye- cherry ways... flying kites and eagles in the heavenly skies et al...

and what did I find... a sensuous poem... serpentine entwining... hmmmm makes me wonder about your state of mind...

before I start being rude (and lewd - don't read that kids), I will simply say, nice work...

regards to you serenity,
sudhir

ma miller
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since 2000-07-11
Posts 806

12 posted 2000-07-19 11:28 AM


I'm off to take a cold shower, serenity ... love every word ... thanks.
serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738

13 posted 2000-07-19 06:05 PM


Wanted to thank you all...and send this one back to play on the same page with m'lusty twin...winky-wink to Janet Marie!!!
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