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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! 
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Don't talk to me about forgiveness Don't shower me with your lies Don't try to win me over With your bedroom eyes I really don't have the time For all your foolish games Tell me can you remember Every one of their names? And in a world filled with darkness A bright light surrounds me Every since I found a way To set my soul free And if you ever wonder Exactly what went wrong Just turn the sound up And listen to this song Cause I've a new life And it isn't you and me Had to take the chance some how And learn how to be free Haven't got but a few pennies to my name Still trying to figure out How to place this game Let's not speak harsh words Thier little ears my hear us And it isn't what it was Let the test of time take shape Nothing to prove It was my turn And I took my move Friends forever after After all that we've been through I hope my dear I can always count on you I'll never tell them lies about you They'd know they weren't true Cause you'll be there every step of the way At least that's what I hope you'll do So listen to my words, take them swiftly to your heart I will always care about you Even though we'll always be apart....... Julie :) |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
That special something that does'nt completely work out baffles me. I know what you mean and it's so very well put but I don't think I'll ever understand entirely, I'm just so happy that it ends in a compromise this way... wonderful poem.....ethome....... |
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Adrienne Junior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 20California |
JulieAnn, I love that way you showed so many emotions in your poem... A touching read. |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
A beautiful poem....as has been said- lots of emotions-- so many in fact i got lost....lol threw me a curve at the end Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
JulieAnn......I think I've felt every emotion that came out in this poem. Anger, frustration, sorrow, rejection and last but not least: letting go. This was like the story of my life here....thank you for writing it, it was great!!! ~~~~~Live for Today~~~~~ taste every single moment |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
Thank you all so much for yur replys.....I have finally learned how to free my soul and figure out WHO I am......It is a great feeling....Thank you all again....  Julie :) |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
EXCELLENT GIRL!!!! strong self reliant writing... very well written love the defiance and still the kindness at the end.. no bitterness is always best.. tho not always possible jm There are places inside our souls - that have never been touched. There are places inside our hearts - that need to be loved this much. ~jm~ |
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