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Throw me Something Mister |
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monique Member
since 2000-02-03
Posts 369Louisiana 
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Throw me letters Hips under my hands Zigzaging my posterior Searching into the situation Let's play vowels Joinging the consonants Nourishing our eyes Let's galop the clean page Lacerating the free space Invigorating our thoughts Let's instil their positions Inviting creation Swirling in space Let's blow the horn at her apparition Let us be overcome X-ray of wisdom Let's sail the universe Let's die Letting life Reuniting the visionaries Let's exhale the muse Let's mask the time Iceskating under bewitched snow Let's master our movements Graciously Hallucination vision of animals Attaquing my senses Let's crucify the demons Skilfully Let's win the battle Xenon is our witness Subsequently Let's swim in the ocean of the universe Let's revive heaven and earth Savoring eternity monique |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Write on! Beautifully done, Monique!  Denise |
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monique Member
since 2000-02-03
Posts 369Louisiana |
Merci beaucoup Denise! I first wrote it in french, before i met you all, in a poetry newsgroup. I translate it in english and someone said, the last two lines, a famous english poet had wrote it. Well i don't know who the guy is and i thought of it in french so maybe his spirit fell upon me to say it. I did not mean to plagiarize, it would be a pretty boring thing to do copying someone else's line. monique |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Excellent Monique. . . "Savoring eternity. . ." what a wonderful thought. . . Great poem. . . ------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
This is exquisite...loved the soft rush of thoughts, sweet and urgent all at once...lovely. |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Monique~ this is wonderful! -SEALive,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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monique Member
since 2000-02-03
Posts 369Louisiana |
Thank you! Thank you! Thank you! I enjoy all your compliments and hum! hum! the attention that goes with the compliments You'all a sweet bunch of flowerpeople monique |
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