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You are...that star
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You are...that star |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia 
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As I look up to the sky wishing upon a star I look to the brightest and I know just where you are ~~ You haven't travelled to far from me Just a twinkle or two away Everytime I look to the sky I find you begging me to stay ~~ You twinkle once and then some more Then I'm hypnotised For you have cast a lovely spell That sparkles in my eyes ~~ So every night when I look to the sky I know that you'll be there For I know that I'm not alone Because the night sky is what we share ~~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Absolutely beautiful Tracie!! Loved it  |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Hello little one Thanks for reading and replying, appreciate it Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
this poem is a lovely hypnotic spell perfect tracie... a sweet read indeed later-lucky star-gator jm There are places inside our souls - that have never been touched. There are places inside our hearts - that need to be loved this much. ~jm~ |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Tracie, all the lights of heaven for me today. This is just beautiful.  Oh yes it's beauty in a perfect form. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Tracie, Very nice, enjoyed |
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MysticalNights Member
since 2000-05-17
Posts 112Oklahoma |
Beautiful... Great writing! A Dream is a Wish the Heart Makes... |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
The nighttime sky is truly a beautiful thing...as is this poem!!! Bridgette "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
you held me in a trance there... tracie... lovely poem regards, sudhir |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Tracie* Great work once again The night sky anda special someone is always a wonderful combo! |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
YIKES.......what the heck did I do???? LOL oh well Tracie I really enjoyed enough for three replies  [This message has been edited by Butterflies_dont_cry (edited 07-18-2000).] |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
I don't recall hitting that button more than once... lol OOPs!! [This message has been edited by Butterflies_dont_cry (edited 07-18-2000).] |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
beautifully written Tracie ... ~~~ Tonight I'll send one to the skies it won't be near so great You'll have to squint and look real hard it could take any shape In case you miss it don't despair it only weighs an ounce It may not reach a human eye but it's the thought that counts Rex [This message has been edited by Rex Allen McCoy (edited 07-17-2000).] |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
So every night when I look to the sky I know that you'll be there For I know that I'm not alone Because the night sky is what we share ..lovely! God grant me the serenity to accept the people I cannot change, the courage to change the one I can, and the wisdom to know it's me. ~Unknown |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Tracie, This was excellent my friend. Sigh, what a beautiful way to view the night sky. Those stars twinkle and shine so bright. Great writing my friend. Lone Wolf Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
how many times I've looked to the night sky knowing someone I loved was looking to never say never |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
tracie, the sky is never so big that you can't see the eyes of another. . . Wonderful poem my friend. . . -------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Firstly...*WOW* my sweet friends I couldn't believe all the replies...THANKS Janny~ Thanks ever so much for your wonderful and most sweet reply...Thanks Tracie~ Marsha~ I'm so glad you like the beauty in this Thanks Tracie~ Symour~ Glad that you enjoyed this See Ya Tracie~ MN~ Thanks very much Tracie~ Bridgette~ Yes you are so right thanks for you commentsTracie~ Sudhir~ Did I..wow Glad you liked Bye Tracie~ Hello little butterflies~ x 3 how lucky I am Thanks for you lovely comments hon Tracie~ Hello sweet Rexie there in the night sky I see you there with my little eye ~~ Your sparkling bright Your twinkling near I see you winking Way up there ~~ For you are friend I hold so dear Always sparkling Crystal clear ~~ Thanks dear Rex...you're a gem Love Tracie~ EagleOne~ So glad you thought so Thanks Tracie~ Dear LW~ Next time you're howling towards the moon think of me Love Ya Tracie~ Paula~ For sure hon Thanks Tracie~ Ah such beauty in your words Sven...thanks for your beautiful comments Love Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Across the heavens love shines forever. Beautiful read and full of promise. |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Mark~ Thanks so much for your lovely comments Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
As I look up to the sky And see the stars shining bright I think of the ones I saw in your eyes When we first held each other that night Sorry, this made me think of a very special night with a very special lady (sigh) |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Tracie~ Twinkle - twinkle, little friend. I saw you in the sky last night. Lovely little thoughts. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Jeffrey~ Don't say sorry, I'm pleased that I could bring lovely memories back for you with this Tracie~ Marge~ So pleased to give you some lovely thoughts for once as you always send them my way with your poetry Love Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
These are the same thoughts that kept me going when my hubby worked out of town for a few years ... sigh ... lovely verse Tracie! Beautiful! Best wishes, /Kit |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Kit~ I'm so pleased when I can bring such happiness to someone with one of my poems, so glad you liked love Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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