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Insecurities Balance
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Insecurities Balance |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow 
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Insecurities Balance Glance upon the fallen edges of night, within the torn seams lie embedded fright. Hauntings of the cruel fate of childhood, the fury of fun to harass another. Then as you speak your misunderstood. Insecurities balance dead upon adult floor, the touch, feel, and grasp, stolen, and killed from my core. Long before it's birth could ever see light. The years of barrage creep, and crawl, attaching to and hindering my now daily fight. |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
On some level I can totally relate to this pain LD and it is a daily struggle but always remember that you are and always will be better than those who put you down. THey will only win once you believe their lies. Take care, big hug and smile  Excellently expressed. "Out of sorrow entire worlds have been built Out of longing great wonders have been willed They're only little tears, darling, let them spill" Nick |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
gloria.... everything you write gets better and better.... you are truly presenting some dynamic work! |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Lost Dreamer.... This was a great work of art! The pictures were deep, the words painting vivid colors..... I enjoyed reading this very much.. ~~~~~Live for Today~~~~~ taste every single moment |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Brian: Thank you, this was just one of those dark ponderings hidden deep, that found it's way to the surface. Lots of soul searching been happening within lately. Doreen: A mighty big thanks to you for your grand compliment. Wow, your praise makes what I write feel right. |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Sunny1: Thank you very much. |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
LD* This was haunting and powerful writing, I remember the "sticks and stones" bit but at times I think stones would be better. Great work~ |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Hanging on the words and hopeful of a happy turn. Sadly it ended the way it began. Beautiful words. Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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